Originally posted by BattleDrone
Needs some percussive break layered on top, some filter action on the bass and some more decoration to keep it all interesting.
Not bad.
Can you help me with telling me what kind of filter on the bass? Btw Thanks for good commenter ! I appreciated!
U got a good base, It just sounds a little empty, like ur drums and melods. need 2 sound a little fuller/wider. It would sound better if things were a little thicker. Good idea thou
drums need to be layered to give a fuller sound, kik is too loud, structure needs a lot of work, very basic track, lacks focus, gets very repetitive and tiring. try adding fx and giving the track some direction, change it up, the bass and synth lines really need some work. get some sounds in there that grab the listeners attention.
some interesring drum work in here but you wouldnt win prizes with the melodies in my opinion
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08-05-2010 16:27
Akada unregistered
Nice tempo and clean intro, could do with some more layers maybe FX filter mods etc. Like the slowed down break at 1.40+. Some other synths needed to either compliment or replace the second half of the tune as it gets repetetive and sounds a bit empty.Do like the whistle sound, it shoud switch to this much earlier in the track.
Keep working on this, nice one.
you're drums are really good in my opinion. BUT
I notice that in a lot of your songs, you use basic synths.
Like your reese in Close, if you'd make it more wet (in chorus) or you'd just change the way you filter it, you could make your synths sound much cooler.
As others have said, this could use some layers on the drums and some filter on the bass. Try ohmicide plugin It's a pretty versatile distortion plug-in. Maybe adding a little dirt might give it some extra dynamic that its kinda missing right now. I do enjoy the little break-beat part you've got goin on and you've got some nice drum edits. I recognize most of your synth sounds b/c i use FL studio too. NOt sure if this is a good thing or not. Try adding some FX to spice it up. Overall, not bad, room for improvement.
This is crude rude. If it was polished up, a few more effects and some modulation on the bass and synths. Whack an lfo or envelope on some of the parts to make it move more. It all sounds a tad stagnant. Do all that and it will be pure rude
Drums sound good mate. I'm listening on my Technic 'phones and they tend to be a bit mid heavy and top light so I'm not sure if I'd layer up the snare with a more crack-ing one.. Good tune tho.
