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Emblem-X
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we've been recording this weekend, the new equipment arrived
; so i thoughts i'd dropp something
it's ruff sketch of what this track is gonna become! First 2 verses are by Revisionist and last verse is mordekaï on the mic
http://users.pandora.be/peter.gabriels2/...20Untitled4.mp3
cheerz; lemme know what you think
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03-06-2004 21:20 |
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Soi
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Mc does a nice job, good voice: young but outlived and hardcore, reminds me of some emocore-singers
combination music + words: a-ok!
music: violins are lying sweet in the mix, if they should carry the whole weight of the song, put them more upfront, mess high and reverb-y. But the way you present them, like more background-atmospherics, is nice in any case.
At the end of the track, the beat reveals itself: nice rythmical pattern, you should get that more upfront, let it come to it's right in the song itself.
but still a very nice result for a rough sketch with the newborn knob-twiddling-tools!!
amen, rest assured
suggestions: snare somewhat fatter, add more body to the sound, same for kick, but maybe you wanted a jazzy-sounding drumkit. In that case, you succied.
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03-06-2004 22:26 |
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Emblem-X
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03-06-2004 23:55 |
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Surya
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Dunno anything about this style, but sounds like it's quite well made. Vocalists are quite decent. But they're a bit too loud imo
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04-06-2004 10:14 |
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