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freddy reeks 
break yo self foooo
Registration Date: 10-02-2010
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Please check out my new track 'Repentance' and post your comments here!
So its in the early stages so simple, Im looking to add some effects/samples etc. and evaluate on the begg. and end. I suppose its a particular style but want to hear ppls feelings. So hit me up
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24-04-2010 21:59 |
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Tonedef
2ginger
Registration Date: 05-07-2005
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interesting mate.. sounds a little progession sessions... like the melody and the piano is a sweet touch, but you need more beats and plenty more sub.. goood idea tho 
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25-04-2010 00:21 |
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BattleDrone
2161... the future.
Registration Date: 30-12-2005
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continuous long bassnotes and a piano sounds like "The XX" rather than DnB.
Make a groovy bassline instead and keep bass and drums only at this stage. When you got that right you can add other stuff "as required".
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26-04-2010 09:30 |
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goonybag
Wicked Producer
Registration Date: 12-11-2006
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id change that intro synth sound, seems really basic and 2 dimensional, the string type samples are aweful, id replace these with some nice evolving pads. drums need to be beefed up and do sound a little robotic, change em up for sure. All the sounds used seem like a bunch of presets from a really shit keyboard. sorry dude, but not feelin this at all.
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01-05-2010 01:58 |
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dark genius
Producer
Registration Date: 04-11-2009
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It sounds like some obscure techno up until 1.10 mins
Then it picks up a bit, I think it needs to go back to the drawing board though.
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04-05-2010 00:49 |
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bm84
Bone Man
Registration Date: 14-11-2007
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the intro and breakdown seem kinda random tbh and the drums definitely need some variation. some bass would add to it too
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04-05-2010 19:16 |
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