track is cool, and the drums go at a nice pace but the snare is way too weak, layer bunches more snare samples with taht. Lots of cool sounds in here tho, just beef up snare n kick and lower the hats. Bass sounds r cool but sometimes they sound conflicting. Sub conflicts with the other stuff. The bandpass filter on the one ll one sounds a tad bit resonant for me. lfo sounded cool tho
That sub bass in intro is SIK, The snares could have just a little more 2 them imo(just a LITTLE more thickness). When it drops the new bass not the sub clashes a bit with things i feel, sounds good but clashes in parts. Also wot i call the 'Inbetweens'.. the snares inbetween the kik n snare are a little loud. Wikid vibe thou, nice and orig. my friend. I look 4ward 2 the finished product.
gets very borin after a while especially intro would beneifit from some more fx imo bassline gets very boring needs automation desperately and other edits
bass reminds me of a spinline track, very nice, good work there, lovin the feedback style sounds too, gotta say i find it hard to control these types of sounds but you have done a good job there
. on the other hand tho, (not to be rude) but all this really needs is a fresh beat with plenty of beef to it, there's no punch in your snare. in my opinion this would be such a killer the drums were better. good work tho, gotta love that bass
not bad could use some work drums are kinda cool i like the synth work hi dont work at all in the tune i would change the hi's sry man good start but the hi's kinda kill it .
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. on the other hand tho, (not to be rude) but all this really needs is a fresh beat with plenty of beef to it, there's no punch in your snare. in my opinion this would be such a killer the drums were better. good work tho, gotta love that bass 
(but not in the good way sorry).
