your synthpad is really cool (intro) but you're OVERfiltering the envelope of your drums. It's like you put a flanger on your drums and I'd make less envelopefilterstuff.
Good beginning but really needs a lot of work though. You start with the same instruments and the instruments stay the same throughout your track. Add some more synths or begin using less synths.
I think you should prolonge the period when there was no filt. on the beats, It need a couple bars when there r no fx on the beats imo so it impacts. Really erie feel 2 it thou. A sci fi film sample would go best I think.
good ideas sound needs to be cleaner hi is a bit splashy good ideas though synth could use a lil work eq and fit in the tune a bit more tune has good potential
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u used the same break sliced up that you did in the other song, dont do that. Make your own breaks by layering maybe this break with another break or individual drum hits. Make sure that when the break comes in it is hitting heavy. If you look into slicex or whatever you use you can see that each individual slice can be sent to a different fx channel. Process each sound in the break so it sounds different, say add compression. (look that up)
id make that intro more simple, get to the point with it, you think its going to drop, then it doesnt, over and over again, im waiting for those drums to do there thing, they sound like they would be nice and heavy but the filters keep that hidden. sounds like one big intro that needs to be cut right back. keep at it.
id make that intro more simple, get to the point with it, you think its going to drop, then it doesnt, over and over again, im waiting for those drums to do there thing, they sound like they would be nice and heavy but the filters keep that hidden. sounds like one big intro that needs to be cut right back. keep at it.
