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Travis_Huckins Travis_Huckins is a male
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Please check out my new track 'Detonation Minus' and post your comments here!


I created this track with reason 4. The voice and plane sounds are from the public domain movie Killers From Space.

Do you think that the drums need more variation?

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This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by Travis_Huckins: 21-04-2010 01:19.

21-04-2010 00:44 Homepage of Travis_Huckins
Machette
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wooooow good preview, the bass line sounds great, with the pad behind ! you could improve mixdown especially during this pads+bass lines.
i think that you don't need to release your drumloops during the intro, that could give much more power on the drop...
i will follow this one.
21-04-2010 02:05
SteakJohnson SteakJohnson is a male
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The bass is really sick. I think tho that you should edit the shuffle of the drums so that the sub snare has less release. id replace the tappy hats in background also with ride cymbals. Lovin the bass though, very modulated sounding (resampled?) Kick sounds kinda quiet to me

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21-04-2010 03:02
Scurf Scurf is a male
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well in my taste, drums are good,(maybe some layer more ) but the bass groove and melodies need variations...

but it`s a matter of taste as i`ve said`....

and i would make it shorter to cut the "borring" feel of the drums...
21-04-2010 20:07
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Drums sound ok 2 me, They fit nicely in to the bass, Imo id leave them.
22-04-2010 00:01
Travis_Huckins Travis_Huckins is a male
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22-04-2010 01:25 Homepage of Travis_Huckins
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Like the intro, sets the vibe nicely. Ready for lift off, fasten your seatbelts. Hardstepper with nice keys coming in. Just downloaded for my ipod, should wake me up in the morning. Nice switch too. Was expecting something slightly harder given the intro but thats ok with me. Only really got good things to say about it. Maybe toughen it up a bit but really good track overall. Ahhhh wait a minute, should wait for the track to finish before writing up my review. Second drop does just what i asked for. Will crank it up in my car tomorrow. Nice one!
24-04-2010 00:21
Surya Surya is a male
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Find the bassline kinda cool. Drums are quite allright, but bring out the snare and ghosts a bit more.

Found the overall track quite repetetive and the vocal is overused quite a bit.

Some good ideas, but you can do better with these ingredients

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24-04-2010 14:16 Homepage of Surya
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