Not bad needs more on the intro e.g build up also the drop needs FX, some issues with the bass being muddy also. but then it goes out into nothing but the beats you need to fill this part or making it join, needs some work but you could have a good track if you put a little bit more time into it
drums sound great (to me atleast, snare n kick could be harder)
There simply needs to be more going on, like more melodies n stuff. Track has good effects n stuff for those who listen long enough, but the use of more melodies/sounds would add to the track alot i believe. Sounds really relaxing in some parts. In other words tho, it simply doesnt sound finished