the intro was pretty interesting, leading to a nice stepper beat.was thinking that after awhile i thought the beat would have benefited more from some shuffle coming in and then it did, so job done. things i werent too keen on were the stab sounds that sounded like a computer error alert, although looking at the title this may be the intention? also thought the mix could do with a bit more bass... overall i like the dark dancefloor vibe and the scratching effects were pretty cool
One thing I would suggest, is to add a little reverb to whatever that loop is in the intro, to make it not as obvious when the loop ends. Other than that its very good. The drums are strong, the bass is sick, the drum pattern is good, overall an extremely solid track. Is that the windows error sound you are using in there? Another thing I would like to suggest, turn up the volume on the sub bass, I have my sub turned up louder than usual and it still isn't as powerful as I think it could be. Tons of potential for this track.
Cheers!
~Iridion
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