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donnybrook - Dionysus

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donnybrook donnybrook is a male

Donnybrook

Registration Date: 10-03-2010
Posts: 48

Please check out my new track 'Dionysus' and post your comments here!

First official submission, let me know what you think Pleased

I like stuff and things.

This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by donnybrook: 14-04-2010 03:19.

11-04-2010 16:42

SteakJohnson SteakJohnson is a male

another 15 year old...

Registration Date: 17-09-2009
Posts: 162

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i know that break lol. Even though its drumnbass you should put more elements than that. The bass you have here is quite good actually, just make the drums louder and make the kick n snare punch through the bass. add some arps n pads n background

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11-04-2010 19:41

pusha
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Registration Date: 07-01-2010
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i know that break 2 steak not much to this choon bassline if i'm honest sounds just awfull sounds like a distorted electric guitar with the tone way up. this really dont do it 4 me unfortunatly keep at it tho man would be interestin to see how u progress with next choon

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11-04-2010 20:36

SteakJohnson SteakJohnson is a male

another 15 year old...

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well lol i liked the bass, even tho it is more guitarish.
just add lots more variation,

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11-04-2010 21:53

donnybrook donnybrook is a male

Donnybrook

Registration Date: 10-03-2010
Posts: 48

Alright thanks for the tips and advice Big Grin

I like stuff and things.

This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by donnybrook: 12-04-2010 05:15.

12-04-2010 05:15

Scurf

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Registration Date: 26-10-2006
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Wicked intro.
Sick drums. Need a proper mixdown, the synth is too loud, the drums are somehow in the back...

Need more variation.... However it has a lot of potential, but it needs work.

12-04-2010 12:45

kanibalboy kanibalboy is a male

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Registration Date: 28-06-2005
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grimey intro, sik beat, keep it up man.

14-04-2010 01:44

Machette
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Registration Date: 18-04-2010
Posts: 31

BLAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA ! ROCK N ROLL BABY !
dat was hard !
what setup did u use ? with a little more grain on synth line that could become a heavy dance floor destroyer ! i there a sub line ? i'm not sur i can't hear it, maybe try to split ya synth into high+mid/low freq so you have more control about your subs. the second drop could be different, that just suggestions Wink

This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by Machette: 18-04-2010 19:03.

18-04-2010 18:44

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