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Simplicity is the key


Registration Date: 19-03-2010
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Please check out my new track 'Construction' and post your comments here!

This is a preview. Please people give me some reviews. I think i can make this tune hard but i need your help Wink

thx

Simon

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10-04-2010 15:56
Scurf Scurf is a male
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It has it`s groove but to make it sound more prominent, try hoover sounding synths.

Also try to play the intro pad lower for about an octave or smth like that....

Otherwise it sounds very promising...
10-04-2010 17:05
Age Break Age Break is a male
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like the synth manBig Grin
like the lp on the drums in beginning
kick is a bit thumbing, try cutting the mids a bit down, and boosting around 80-100hz
the track is a bit empty a bit too empty imo.
try adding some more elements

looking forward to end resultBig Grin

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10-04-2010 17:20
simage
Simplicity is the key


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Got it Wink
Thanks mates

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10-04-2010 17:23
SteakJohnson SteakJohnson is a male
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STuff it needs:
more aggresive bassline
a synth playing not unlike hi hats (low volume gated synth wud be cool)
take down the upper mids/low trebles on those drums.
some echo-y aregeggios in background would also be cool.
beat is good, i would just change the sub snare in the shuffle a lil, release on it sounds a little long
kick sounds clippy slightly? idk
It has good structure but build on that

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10-04-2010 20:13
donnybrook donnybrook is a male
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Personally, I would change the sound of the synth on the intro. Sounds a bit too "Escape from New York", at least for my taste. Doesn't fit the flow of the song too well, it does however get better later in the song. The drum intro is dope though, so keep that in, just change your settings on your synth. Really digging your drum though. Keep it up.

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11-04-2010 15:22
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