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Surya 
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Please check out my new track 'Intermezzo' and post your comments here!!!
This is one I made just for fun, in a few hours. It's not sofisticated in any way, there are virtually no variations in the drums, de reece misses sub and there are no FX. And I don't think any of this will be fixed, I have no intention to make thisone a winner 
But I suppose you can enjoy it a few times.
Comments are welcome as always, and higly apreciated 
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31-05-2004 20:18 |
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Raider
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Same comments as above
Drums sound apart from the rest tho, but the overall ain't lo at all.
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01-06-2004 09:24 |
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Akura
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I like the basic feel of the beats, especially the kick (much more natural than the one in the previous track
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02-06-2004 23:22 |
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Surya
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More?
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05-06-2004 10:27 |
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Dave_Akuma
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i like the drum programming...also, the drums sound very, very crisp...i like how you faked the drop at around 1:10---i wasn't expecting that, nice touch...a suggestion would be to add more percussion (maybe another hi hat that's playing steady 16th notes or maybe even 32nd notes, to add more of a feeling of movement, to really add impact to the drop)....a bit more variation in the drums would help, maybe some fills or change-ups every 4 bars or so, nothing major...the bass was really heavy and the melody you had going with the rave stab was nice, but it was pretty much the same melody the entire time....but, in fairness, you said this was done just for fun in a few hours....pretty solid for only a few hour's worth of work...it's a pretty good tune that could be alot better if you ever feel like working on it some more....
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10-06-2004 18:54 |
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Surya
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Who knows? Maybe some day I might
Tnx for the reviews dudes!
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10-06-2004 19:02 |
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Surya
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Feel like bumping thisone
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01-07-2004 11:34 |
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thechronic
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Ravin time!!
Bit cheapy main melody, but in some way I think all rave influenced stuff sounds cheap
Jeez I find it hard to review those WIP tracks, even though this one doesn't even seem to be IP anymore. Guess that's the trouble, it's easier to give comments on finished tracks, but then the producers often don't want to change a lot anymore.
Nice break base, sounds very open and powerful, as always with your tracks. You got a good way of chosing sounds to layer and not sticking to just layering a couple of loops.
The second (pitched) 'kick drum' is a bit overwhelmingly deep imo, it seems to want to take my ear drums hostage and it puts the snare in bad daylight, making it almost hollow sounding where i'm sure it sounds fine by itself.
For the rest not much to say... not really my style this thing and it's doomed to oblivion anyway 
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01-07-2004 12:48 |
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Surya
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You got that right, there's no real reason to continue thisone. Not for me at least. If someone feels it should be finished: I'll give you the samples and stuff
And yeah, for me a good track is all about choosing the right sounds...
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