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Glodaragz Glodaragz is a male
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Please check out my new track 'Glass' and post your comments here!

I'm working of this tune, it's still unfinished, because i can't finish on my old and weak computer.I will get new computer for 5-6 weeks and i will finish there.Because like i said i have old and weak computer and fl studio is crashing over and over.The tune name is work name so if you have some advice about the name i will listen Smile .Thanks and i hope you will enjoy! Smile
07-04-2010 22:24 Homepage of Glodaragz
Chamber206
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nice drumwork... the lead synth is way too loud... needs to be taken down a notch. pad seems to be off a bit at the breakdown (at around 1:45 mins). desperately needs a bassline.
07-04-2010 22:40
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man that synth is way to loud sounds pretty much same as last track u posted that synth is piercing my ears sounds far to robotic as well that synth is panned badly as well sounds like its wrappin round my head and suffocatin me!! needs a bassline or sumit to fill out the emptiness drums are ok could do with some edits now and then to keep things interesting

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08-04-2010 08:16
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good start. I think this has some potential. Kinda straddles the line b/t liquid and dark which is pretty cool. I'd work on more breaks / edits, throw in a nice sub, some fx, and really work on some climatic drops - I think that would really help this tune. Hope this helps.

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08-04-2010 14:03
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Your drums are good but those synths really make the song bad.
Keep the drums and DROP ALL the synths Wink start over

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08-04-2010 16:51
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Its a base 2 work from, i think u could def. take it 2 another lvl tho by dropping the synth at some point for a bass. beef out ur beats a bit and sort the lvls of the synth also. Keep working on it !
09-04-2010 21:54
SteakJohnson SteakJohnson is a male
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dont why this got such a low score bombing I Actually quite like it,
just dont use the fruity love philter base modulation its so obvious

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10-04-2010 20:02
Glodaragz Glodaragz is a male
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quote:
Originally posted by SteakJohnson
dont why this got such a low score bombing I Actually quite like it,
just dont use the fruity love philter base modulation its so obvious


hahaha, I will change it Smile . Btw i don't know too why this have so low score Smile
But any way i will make it better.And you everybody will like it then Smile
11-04-2010 18:53 Homepage of Glodaragz
Vly Vly is a male
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The melody and that pad remind me too much of some State of mind tune (Sun king maybe) ;o

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11-04-2010 22:07
Glodaragz Glodaragz is a male
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quote:
Originally posted by Vly
The melody and that pad remind me too much of some State of mind tune (Sun king maybe) ;o


Yes i got that when i made a half tune.
But nothing is stolen, everything is legal Smile
It's difrent tune, just with bass notes are same.
13-04-2010 14:26 Homepage of Glodaragz
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