The lfo on the bass seems off. The second snare that comes in just is a little too loud. I would like to hear more synths and fx in this. Right now it is way too minimal.
Keep making tunes, you will get better. Practice is all you need.
it sounds like u have got a car alarm in ur beat when second lots of snares etc drops in this some stereo seperation may sort this if not its just a dreadfull sample
I like your synths but your lfo rate isn't right at some times and use different drum samples.
Also try to put more variation into your drums bcuz now we listen to 6min same drums.
You can really make this better if you want to. I'd say pay attention to the details
Originally posted by pusha
it sounds like u have got a car alarm in ur beat when second lots of snares etc drops in this some stereo seperation may sort this if not its just a dreadfull sample
i dont know what you mean by a 'car alarm'... at the end of the track i let the main drums roll out... do you hear it there? i doubt it is the samples i started with... the kicks are from the DS+SBS pack. the snares are a mix of 808 and a reason packed kick... blockrock or whatever. i suppose it could be the cymbals... but more likely it is something from the synths.
and yeah i know the lfo is off.. i dont have it set to 4/4 or 3/8 or whatever pattern, it is just on the free setting... i wanted to give it more of an organic feel... (i.e. less techy, and structured) but i guess that didnt work.
does anyone have any ideas on how to work the LFO's to give it that rolling feeling?
Nice drums in the intro:-)
The drum layer around 0:47 sound somehow too loud on my speakers...
Good bassline, good drum work overall...
Needs some pads, and more atmo, rearranging...
Excelent preview, looking forward for the final version.
