2nd Attempt at Drum and Bass

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2nd Attempt at Drum and Bass

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FoundingFather
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Registration Date: 31-03-2010
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Hi everyone,

Hey guys,

I just started production a few weeks ago, and here is my work in progress. Im still learning Logic, but I am beginning to get a grasp of it. Please leave any comments/constructive criticism, as any input would be greatly appreciated.

Here is the first break down I have ever done,and I need to work on switching up the variation with the drum pattern.What I am going to work on today is is the second drop, switching up the bass and putting some different sounds on top, and really working on the drum sounds to get it just right. Let me know what you guys think.

http://soundcloud.com/foundingfather/lighter-dnb-3rd-draft

This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by FoundingFather: 31-03-2010 22:11.

31-03-2010 19:22

FoundingFather
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41 views and no comments? Please let me know what you guys think.

01-04-2010 21:02

donnybrook donnybrook is a male

Donnybrook

Registration Date: 10-03-2010
Posts: 48

I will indulge you Big Grin

Your synth and bass seem to be a bit too quiet.
That glitch @ :44 is very good, tiny volume increase on it.
I don't like the synth following it though, switch that out in my opinion.
I really like the synth you ended with, however it on the whole, none of the synths match well enough.
Nice buildup 1:24+
Not a big fan of the bassline at 1:27, it has some nice parts but theres a few notes in there that sound a bit out of place.
So yeah pretty decent overall, good for your second attempt! Keep on rollin.

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I like stuff and things.

11-04-2010 16:12

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