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Zugzwang Zugzwang is a male
Doin' it for the love


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Please check out my new track 'Cranberry Juice' and post your comments here!

That's just a working title lol.

Thanks for checking out this new piece I'm working on, please let me know what you think or how it can be improved! Made with FL 8.
24-03-2010 11:03
BattleDrone BattleDrone is a male
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Not into this hard stuff myself.
Bassline sounds to "nice" to have an solid impact. Needs wicked filtering and more edits.
Drums sound pretty halfstep which is a bit slow.


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24-03-2010 11:12 Homepage of BattleDrone
freddy reeks freddy reeks is a male
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Wikid track, just meake the beats pucnhier... Id like u 2 stik a dnb beat on itBig Grin
24-03-2010 14:11
KILLER_FAN KILLER_FAN is a male
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the start is good but you should improve the drums, get more kick, some distortion on the drums would work fine. and hell yeah new bass samples, with twisted wicked effect.
24-03-2010 15:31
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Interesting... its like dnb meets metal! The double-kick stuff reminds me of a drummer friend I had in High School that was obsessed with double kick - LOL Big Grin I really like the bass & the breakbeat is cool. Personally, i think you should leave it as a breakbeat tune. This is definitely quite different than anything I've heard on this site. Big ups for uniqueness at least, even though it might not be for everyone Wink

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24-03-2010 21:16
pusha
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nice idea man those levels are way to high tho man iv been playin quite a few traks on me spkrs from the sight when this one come on it nearl gave my dog a heart attack lol

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24-03-2010 21:24
Puzzle Puzzle is a male
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Yeah BD already said it, the bass is way too clean.. Needs to be way more evil Tongue

Otherwise this is really nice man, the intro's sounding great now!

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24-03-2010 22:13 Homepage of Puzzle
simage
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already a real cool intro mate. Kinda dark but that's probably how you want it. Ofcourse i can't judge the entire song because this is just intro and you don't really have a drop yet. I love your drum variation BUT somewhere in the song you have to go to the default dnb drum patterns.
i like your reese bass,... looking forward to hear the entire song

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25-03-2010 21:01
Age Break Age Break is a male
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nice intro, like the pads etc.
only I don't like that uha uha uha thingy to much.
reese is greatBig Grin love it drums are nice, snare is a bit too loud though.

like it man! looking forward to the end result!

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25-03-2010 23:15
asheriscool asheriscool is a male
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this track sounds very... metal lol. its interesting but i dont really like this song.. The build up has some cool sounds in it, and its long which is good as the length alone can add some tension. Those fx at 5 seconds that come in a few times get kinda repetitive. try adding a bit more variety in the intro. and when the beat drops at 43 seconds, you should add some more layers in the background and with the drums cause it sounds really empty, unless that's the intention and its building up to a next section. Overall it sounds like it could be a good track if you rewrite the drums and work on melodies and such more. hope this was helpful
25-03-2010 23:50
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love this tune would be nice if it drops into a dnb beat and get that lead bass sounding a bit dirtier
26-03-2010 10:39
Zugzwang Zugzwang is a male
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Cheers everyone for the reviews!

I'll be returning the favor!
29-03-2010 05:10
Karl M Karl M is a male
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I think that the intro is great and by the end its getting hot. I would hear more of the end, the beats, at the begining, like after 45 seconds, more junglish style coule be good for it ! A big jungle beat crossed with another with a lot of rimshots and snares !

I heard 5 times, and i dont like the beat u made, I like it but not for this one i think..

Dont know if my comments will help but consider a good opinion for your work !
29-03-2010 11:31 Homepage of Karl M
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