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dark genius
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Please check out my new track 'Sexual Ecstasy [128kbs]' and post your comments here!

Vocal samples were recorded by a lady friend called 'Killa Kitty'
This is my first upload but not my first track please can you give me some pointers as the quality of DNB on this site is much better than mine!
23-03-2010 05:54
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nice atmosphere on the intro, but it was maybe a little long. Its okay if there's more you're setting up, but the drop when the bass came in was a little weak imo. Maybe try dropping out the drums / pads for a bit just before the bass comes in. Overall, not a bad start. This' got an old school feel to it. Try some more variation in the break & another melody or something to break it up a little bit.

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23-03-2010 15:01
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there are some wikid elements to ur track, imo u should drop the horor chords that play thru out when the bass sound come in, It will make the bass more effective then bring them bak later or somin. Overall im likein the vibe. I think u could hit harder 4 a couple bars if u drop the horor chords thou. Over all work on it, i like it.
23-03-2010 20:26
dark genius
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Thanks for the great advise. I am noting this all down so I can rework it. You can never see your own mistakes so I need some musical proof readers Drummer
23-03-2010 20:28
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Excellent dark pads, good vocal samples.
Drums need to be more variable.
Bassline is too weak it needs to be more fuzzy and detuned.
Good idea, finish this one :-)
23-03-2010 22:19
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Nice tune mate, i like the idea,this probably is not finished version, so i can give u bigger comment if you put the finished version.Big ups and keep it up!
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Thanks.
25-03-2010 22:19
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nice atmosphere going on!
drums are good nice amen.
bass is fine, work on it a bit more, maybe at like a sub bass to it, to give the lower freq. some more ear candyTongue


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25-03-2010 23:10
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I think the growl/bassline should be 1 octave lower and have the speed of the LFO a lot slower
29-03-2010 00:51
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Nice discussion.............

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