Please check out my new track 'Leafs' and post your comments here!
This is my 2nd song ever. My first song sucked so there's no way i'm gonna upload that but i actually like this.
I was inspired by Netsky and Camo & Krooked.
Please, be honest if you think it's shit or if you think it rocks.
All criticism allowed
It sounds cool but u could get it sounding better if you beefed everything up a bit. Maby use some distortion or compress ur beats a bit, try some stuff out. It just sounds a bit thin if u know wot i mean. I like it thou and remember...BEEF
drums are nice
might wanna try an amen after a while, but thats how I like things
your piano melodie is a bit to reverby in begin.
after the bass kicks in it awesome
and the bass is nice too
very chill vibe man.
might wanna put something in like strings with this, might make the whole thing even chiller (don't put the strings at a high volume if your gonna use them, when there not so present they can really have the effect of brainfucking you if you know what I mean
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very good voor your first song man!
like to hear more tracks like this from you
(not gonna give it a whoa rolling at voting on the party cause I don't want to hear this on a party but when I bike to school in the morning
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Not bad for second tune.Sound cool,I don't like the drum section, special the snare,It's so bad-snare.
I love the piano part ( it is sample right?)if its not sorry than
.Try to make a break snares.Maybe than tune will be full.If you don't know how to make that send me PM and i will do my best to tell you.
Big ups !
dig that piano intro. Maybe try adding a subtle phaser to get some movement. Nice bass. It sounds like deep & hollow if that makes sense. Need more variation in your break tho. Overall, for your 2nd track this has potential. Nice chill, liquid vibe. Keep working at it.
Interesting intro....
The drums need to be layered....
Nice piano melody.
Good bass note around 00:44.
Hats are not good, maybe other selection of hats imo, these hats don`t belong here.
The second part is almost the same as the first one, some more variation, like ride cymbals and crashes.
Overall good preview.
nice melodies here m8e.
track could really benefit from a hi pass amen break at 1.05 just to add some nice shiizzle and energy,
(i know all the .be boys will be saying ahhh hi pass amen bleh boring, but it would work really well here).
kick is cool but i must agree about the snare m8 soz
lose that metallic snare layer and leave the snare that comes in at 3.18.
bass in nice too, add pads and a sweet string,
id like to hear this a bit more developed.
peace m8.
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Hi, I'll be honest because I want people to be honest and blunt with my shit w/o sugar coating.
Overall it could be better sound wise, don't have any tips on that unfortunately. But I would add some arpeggio in the background with some sythns. Layer it with some pads/strings. The bass, I don't know whats wrong but maybe it could be eq some more. It kinda hurts my ears. Besides the sounds you should try start jamming with this tune. I mean after a while the piano gets boring, go crazy with it.
This track has great potential, it's almost ridiculous. I love the piano line and bassline. Though the piano sound is fuzzy. I don't know what it is exactly, but it might a delay you put on it? Or some parameters you tweaked? I don't know, but if could be clearer and brought ever so slightly, it would be amazing.
It sounded great for how simple it is. I know it's only your 2nd tune, and it ain't half bad dude! What would be cool to add in is like a pad sound, or additive synth line. Something to fill in the gaps between the bassline and paino melody and hold it together. It takes a lot of experimenting, but it would come out eventually. Try downloading Protoplasm, it's a great additive synth. I use it constantly.
the sound is great, good mix i think. but the beat needs more variations because there are not much sounds, so the beat is more important.. the piano is great ! with the bassline, perfect job !! ;-) i hear a little high contrast influence.. the last album maybe.. ? i think it is a nice track but it needs a couple of sounds, an atmosphere to make the piano sound better.. the hi hats, maybe try a dry ride with a little reverb to give a punch.
.Try to make a break snares.Maybe than tune will be full.If you don't know how to make that send me PM and i will do my best to tell you.
