Please check out my new track 'Again' and post your comments here!
This tune is made in FL studio 7,Probably not finished yet, so if u have some idea to share with me I will appreciated.I used sytrus for sub bass and the melody.I'm amateur, with 1 year experience.So this is my first tune on this site, hope you will enjoy listening
Like the intro, drums are cool.
Whoa excellent bass u got in there. The drums need to be more tight, use punch compression and/or layer them. That synth is somehow dull some more variation.
The arrangement is good nice build up in the second part. But again that synth. And the drums are somehow also the same.
However very good first try, some more pads, more hats and break chop and it`s going to be lovely:-)
Keep it up
That is a sick sub man. I use sytrus for all my subs, too. It's perfect. I'm sure you'll be adding more variation to the break, main melody since you say this isn't done yet. keep it up. for a first post, this is pretty smooth.
Develop your pad/synth loop structure it is crying out for more variation, depth, more samples mirroring it, bouncing off of it, moving with it etc
Add more depth to it either by adding another sample on top that sounds similar but is on a different frequency so they dont clash, or just layer the same sample on different keys (notes) and build up the melody that way with progression and variation (making sure they are all on the same key.
The sub bass sounds very clean and smooth.
Hats sound nice and clean, just need turning down a touch.
With very minor tweaking of levels, on whole the sound quality of the mix is very good.
You just need alot of work doing on adding more sounds, adding depth to the samples you already have and then come up with originality in the song structureto make it stand out.
The drum loop needs some more fills and rolls etc and the snare needs another layer on top just to give it a touch more roundness in the mix. (this is all probably stuff your gonna do anyways so apologies)
For someone who has been doing it for so little time, you have all the sound quality spot on.
Take it from someone whos been there, dont get disheartend by poor criticism, this stage is all about learning learning learning learning learning and when you finished you learn some more. Just keep reading as much as you can, practice and trying new things (producing methods etc)
Thanks for that lovely reviews.I really appreciated.So I will try to fix that thinks for this tune.Problem is that i'm out of idea.But i'm working right now to add some new things,so I hope new version wont be so boring and mono.I'm glad u like it.And thanks again I really appreciated!
This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by Glodaragz: 19-03-2010 13:56.
not a bad tune could make the beats a bit more beefy nice sub bass just could do with liftin track with beats would be more rollin if ya know wot i mean ne way keep at it mate
whit some work you could deff make this into a very nice tune man.
the melodie is a bit repetetive, and you should pick some other notes here and there as it sounds a lil strange to me.
your sub could be a bit louder, just a tad.
(or lower the other elements cause they may over power the sub)
drums are nice, rides a bit too load maybe(I always like them low but thats my way).
so have some changes maybe add some elements, cause adding a second melodie that works well with your main melodie makes a tune sick whilst it's quite simple.
Originally posted by dLO
That is a sick sub man. I use sytrus for all my subs, too.
3x osc + sytrus is a killer
Indeed,any way i'm working on few pieces, so when they will be finished i will put upload on this site.Or when they reach some level
,Glad u like it all of you.With fact that this is one of my first tunes, so I keep working and hope one day I will reach that level to release my tunes
. Big Ups for all of you.
And once again thanks I appreciated!
It's good but the song grows boring after a minute. You just keep repeating the same melody. In my opinion your song would sound better if you would sometimes cut the melody and play the sub bass and beat and eventually grow back to your melodyline.
It's cool but it's not because you have 1 cool melody pattern you should repeat it all song long.
i kust had a quick flick thru this one it sounds well repeative,this aint really my type of dnb-but u need to work on structure-think in 4s n ur get a pattern 4,8,16,32,64 and so on, so maybe u could write a bline for 4 bars n another for the next 4 uknow make things abit more intresting rather then being in a rush to make something that dont really represent- peace
Hi. Not sure about the intro but as i'm also new to producing i understand how tricky this is. Getting that first arrangement is hard going if you dont have any templates. Think it just needs more time and needs to be a bit busier. I'd try changing the sounds but keep the same structure to see if you get a better fit. Hope this helps.
