drumnbass.be forum » Production » Tunes » marcusg - Imperial Sound Force marcusg - Imperial Sound Force Author Post marcusg Producer Registration Date: 22-08-2008 Posts: 42 Please check out my new track 'Imperial Sound Force' and post your comments here! This is my first attempt in making a dnb song. Sadly I can't say what style it is but I was influenced by some old songs like falcon- sjimmy shake and evol intent. lol, it sounds nothing like those guys. This is a wip and I know this track needs help so bitter criticism is welcomed. 16-03-2010 19:12 BattleDrone 2161... the future. Registration Date: 30-12-2005 Posts: 6,413 Helpfulness rating:  Not bad for a first try. Nothing I can pinpoint as "wrong" except the large amount of reverb, cut it down a bit. Tune really starts to rock near the end. Keep trying, you won't be on top from the first atempt, but you are on your way up! __ Check my soundcloud (exclusive tracks on there) 16-03-2010 22:36 Age Break Filth is my second name Registration Date: 30-11-2009 Posts: 465 Helpfulness rating:  maybe try and put some pads underneath the intro would make it sound more alive like your bass, already has that typical reese sound bit to much reverb maybe. drums are nice, kick could have more boosted freqs. around 80-100 though to give it a bit more punch/bass. mixing sounds alright to me. for your first dnb track you've done a great job needs a lil some more elements in though like a nice synth etc. __ The One - Age Break 16-03-2010 22:39 marcusg Producer Registration Date: 22-08-2008 Posts: 42 I can't help but think I am missing a main theme in this song. Some say that the snare is crap. Should I switch it. I feel like its empty. 16-03-2010 22:53 Scurf Cool Producer Registration Date: 26-10-2006 Posts: 164 Helpfulness rating:  Your selection of sounds is wicked. Needs work on the drums, and it needs some low bass. Good effort keep it up. 17-03-2010 02:02 dawm_rule Tourist Registration Date: 11-03-2010 Posts: 30 Helpfulness rating:  All sounds seem to be in a proper place. Technically speaking, there are minor adjustments you might do, but not so important to mention in relation to EQing. Generally, the mixing process (as it is one of the most important elements) is well done. 17-03-2010 11:30 pusha waveform molester Registration Date: 07-01-2010 Posts: 757 Helpfulness rating:  ha ha love ur honest bitter critiscm lool well for a first attempt this is a hell of a lot better than anything i made when i first started out lovin the beat on this kinda reminds me of a lot of beats that were comin out early 2000 track sounds a bit empty add some pads nd ur be laughin __ buy the ticket take the ride 19-03-2010 18:09 marcusg Producer Registration Date: 22-08-2008 Posts: 42 To be honest I was mostly inspired by early 2000 songs because I didnt know where to get dnb songs. So I went to a torrent and got like 200 random songs that were made at that time. But I appreciate your comments. Musically every one I talked to said the songs sucks so I am not sure if I am gonna finish it. Although it was really a sound experiment. 19-03-2010 22:48 analysiss Producer Registration Date: 02-10-2009 Posts: 90 Helpfulness rating:  wicked 1st attempt,like the way it comes in some of the levels sound off, and the drums need beefing up and variation other then this nice little roller,keep working it also bring some more sounds into the track maybe subtle synth sounds. peace 22-03-2010 04:06 analysiss Producer Registration Date: 02-10-2009 Posts: 90 Helpfulness rating:  na i cant tell what style either maybe liquid jump up 22-03-2010 04:08 drumnbass.be forum » Production » Tunes » marcusg - Imperial Sound Force