nice vibe going on love the pads.
drums are nice too
bass is too loud man and eq your bass bit better so kick is better hearable but that wouldnt be a problem is you lower volume on bass I guess
Interesting sounds in the intro.
Good drum selection.
Nice vocal play.
Some work on the bass needed, try little bit lower, or more detune imo..
The second part is almost the same as the first one, something else, maybe trying different bass sequence, or drum variation ...
Overall good preview, looking forward for the final :-)
The intro was pretty cool with the atmospheric sound and effects. The drums felt good in the mix
I didnt like how the vocals were placed in the song. To me, it just didnt fit in most places. I felt like the song was just getting cluttered especially with the echo. But when it was acapella sounded okay. The other thing that bothered me is that the bass is too loud. I can't really hear the rest of the song because it is too loud until around 3:00. Besides from those minor things that I thought it was alright.
sick atmospherics. nice vocal work. smooth drop @ 1:26. Bass is just okay. Is it supposed to be jump up style? Its lacking some dirtiness if it is. 2:55 = nice quick drop. Overall, not bad. More variation in break & bass could make this a killer
drums sound a bit wompy, they need more punch.
The whole thing doesn't sound very tight, seems like some stuff is moving around independently.
The vocal needs to be more in front.
The drop starts pretty weird, the bassline needs work. This could be a pretty nice tune if you work on it some more.
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Very nice intro atmosphere.
Drum loop is lacking resonance and clarity, needs more hi end in the snare and hats. Dont turn it up though, find another snare maybe and layer it on top, or put the drum loop thru an EQ and trim and boost frequencies.
Too much resonance in parts on the drum loop filter out in to the vocal before the first drop in.
Heavy sounding drop and nice vocal sitting on top of it.
Some of the drum loop pattern progression is a little cheesy in places.
Very Nice bass pattern/hook. Feels like its mising some frequencies to make it a bit more rounder and fuller sounding.
Nice drop out in the middle of the track.
Needs a different bass pattern hook for the second drop other wise it gets far too repetitive.
There is a very nice sample on 04:21 which NEEDS to be in the track more -maybe as part of the second drop, maybe build the new bass hook for the second drop around that sample on 04:21
Hope this helps in some way, feel free to give me your feedback as well.
The atmosphere till 20 seconds, without beat, reminds a dubstep track, made by Scream. The beats are good, but need some punch in it. I would use another snare, benny page style.
The voices are cool, the basses too ! But the beat needs more punch !! Louder, more bass ! A constant sub maybe..A big reese for a change ! Dont know.. But good stuff !
