drumnbass.be forum » Production » Tunes » Age Break - Surrender Age Break - Surrender Author Post Age Break Filth is my second name Registration Date: 30-11-2009 Posts: 465 Helpfulness rating:  Please check out my new track 'Surrender' and post your comments here! heyy guys a lil preview of what im working on atm, still needs things like uplifeters etc. and some more eq'ing and mixing, but just wanted to show this hope you enjoy! comments are welcome __ The One - Age Break 05-03-2010 18:45 dLO dannyLO Registration Date: 29-05-2009 Posts: 325 Helpfulness rating:  Quite a nasty one you've got brewing here. I really like the cutoff filter drums in the beginning. What'd you use for these dark fx and bass, etc. Sounds very wicked! Nice work... cant wait to hear the finished product __ follow me here: http://soundcloud.com/dannylo 05-03-2010 23:39 Age Break Filth is my second name Registration Date: 30-11-2009 Posts: 465 Helpfulness rating:  quote: Originally posted by dLO Quite a nasty one you've got brewing here. I really like the cutoff filter drums in the beginning. What'd you use for these dark fx and bass, etc. Sounds very wicked! Nice work... cant wait to hear the finished product thanks mate just a simple reese with a sub bass underneath, little distrotion chorus the usual and made a some little changes to the lfo here and there __ The One - Age Break 06-03-2010 00:30 Pytchlocka [ » K | R | Y | P | T | O | P | H | Y | T | E™ « ] Registration Date: 25-07-2008 Posts: 146 Woww the drop caught me by surprisee .. Great tune u got goin here man ! love the main beat and atmosphere. u need to bring the subs out alot more tho .. seems like its empty right now. other than that, ur drums are pretty on point and they sound prettyy good. your kick prolly needs to hit at a lower frequency so it feels just right. just a little but tho not so much. anyway, keep working on it. its soundingg great till now man. -cheerz. (: 06-03-2010 02:08 Age Break Filth is my second name Registration Date: 30-11-2009 Posts: 465 Helpfulness rating:  quote: Originally posted by Pytchlocka Woww the drop caught me by surprisee .. Great tune u got goin here man ! love the main beat and atmosphere. u need to bring the subs out alot more tho .. seems like its empty right now. other than that, ur drums are pretty on point and they sound prettyy good. your kick prolly needs to hit at a lower frequency so it feels just right. just a little but tho not so much. anyway, keep working on it. its soundingg great till now man. -cheerz. (: thanks mate yeah im gonna work on that bass needs to sound fatter indeed will do __ The One - Age Break 06-03-2010 02:18 SteakJohnson another 15 year old... Registration Date: 17-09-2009 Posts: 162 Helpfulness rating:  in my opinion the bass is a bit wide but other than that I like it! get that reese grimier sounding! __ [SJ] Black Sun Rising: 06-03-2010 06:01 Age Break Filth is my second name Registration Date: 30-11-2009 Posts: 465 Helpfulness rating:  quote: Originally posted by SteakJohnson in my opinion the bass is a bit wide but other than that I like it! get that reese grimier sounding! I sure will man thanks for the review! __ The One - Age Break 07-03-2010 18:27 Scurf Cool Producer Registration Date: 26-10-2006 Posts: 164 Helpfulness rating:  Excelent intro, like the vocal :-) Hats are good idea, just need to fit in. Good reece idea, just make it more growl, i think is`t detuned too much. Good work, just need to finish it :-) 07-03-2010 18:45 Age Break Filth is my second name Registration Date: 30-11-2009 Posts: 465 Helpfulness rating:  quote: Originally posted by Scurf Excelent intro, like the vocal :-) Hats are good idea, just need to fit in. Good reece idea, just make it more growl, i think is`t detuned too much. Good work, just need to finish it :-) thanks mate I heard that some where in the beginning my drums are playing and suddenly the hats go too, not my style lol. ill have the drums stop like a lil sec before hats pop in usually. have the finished product on here in a couple of months, not gonna rush this one lol __ The One - Age Break 07-03-2010 18:56 tryptech Tryptech Registration Date: 16-08-2006 Posts: 853 Helpfulness rating:  I lll give you some time and you re goin to be a huge techstep producer. Your mixdown is nice, i love the hardness of it. Just ad some midd on your basses. thnx for the nice review, but i think myself thatmy midown could have more depth, its to flat maybe? greetz __ ANALOGUE (Tryptech) 07-03-2010 21:42 Age Break Filth is my second name Registration Date: 30-11-2009 Posts: 465 Helpfulness rating:  quote: Originally posted by tryptech I lll give you some time and you re goin to be a huge techstep producer. Your mixdown is nice, i love the hardness of it. Just ad some midd on your basses. greetz thanks man hope I could give myself that title someday lol my biggest dream atm is that people listen to my shit and think damn! that shit blows my mind. and acctually listen it , and will change my reese not happy with it yet. quote: Originally posted by tryptech thnx for the nice review, but i think myself thatmy midown could have more depth, its to flat maybe? noo man it sounds really pro to me acctually, everything is right on place with eq and everything as loud as it should be, oh and btw your vocal in there is sick. I think you shouldnt change to much with the mixdown. but you better let other guys judge over that cause my ears need alot of training to be able to really help you there __ The One - Age Break 07-03-2010 22:08 BattleDrone 2161... the future. Registration Date: 30-12-2005 Posts: 6,413 Helpfulness rating:  Mixdown is very harsh and noisy, I guess you did use a lot of compression and limiting? Too much reverb and stereo on the basses. Keep working on this, you are improving! __ Check my soundcloud (exclusive tracks on there) 07-03-2010 22:44 Age Break Filth is my second name Registration Date: 30-11-2009 Posts: 465 Helpfulness rating:  quote: Originally posted by BattleDrone Mixdown is very harsh and noisy, I guess you did use a lot of compression and limiting? Too much reverb and stereo on the basses. Keep working on this, you are improving! thanks for review accutally I never use compression lol idk I just have to work on that hearing skill of me. when I look back at my first dnb track I hear so much diffrence, thanks .be __ The One - Age Break 07-03-2010 23:59 JamieWard DJ INDUSTRY Registration Date: 26-02-2010 Posts: 31 Helpfulness rating:  Very nice intro, has character and some very good sounding samples that give it that edgy sound I like. Some issues with sound frequencies fighting for space and headroom but that will come good with the final mixdown. The bass line sounds too far wide on the stereo field and feels very unattatched from the rest of the track. Love the sound of the vocal. Not a fan of the drum pattern in places. There are major issues with the hats and the snare, they are having a major battle on the drop and cutting across each other far too much and makes it sound very messy. I think that the hats need to lose alot of their resonance and hi end and the snare needs to be a bit fuller/rounder to cut across the track a little more. There is a good track here definitely and with the right EQ'ing and a bit more originality and character from the structure of the whole track it will be a good sounding track. I hope this helps in some way matey. __ 17-03-2010 16:39 drumnbass.be forum » Production » Tunes » Age Break - Surrender