drumnbass.be forum » Production » Tunes » dLO - Ten Stomp (ragga Jungle) dLO - Ten Stomp (ragga Jungle) Author Post dLO dannyLO Registration Date: 29-05-2009 Posts: 325 Helpfulness rating:  Please check out my new track 'Ten Stomp (ragga Jungle)' and post your comments here! Whipped this up in a few hours b/t yesterday & today. T-racks to master, ohmicide on the bass, everything else is FL Studio. Samples are all royalty free. Been listening to tons of Visionary, Benny Page, old Alix Perez, Serial Killaz, etc. Was gunning for that old dubplate kinda vibe. All comments / criticisms accepted w/ open arms!!! btw... any suggestions on a better name for this track? __ follow me here: http://soundcloud.com/dannylo 21-02-2010 02:30 pusha waveform molester Registration Date: 07-01-2010 Posts: 757 Helpfulness rating:  likin this. well benny page .reminded me of everyman benny page remix for sum reason. good work man __ buy the ticket take the ride 21-02-2010 15:29 dLO dannyLO Registration Date: 29-05-2009 Posts: 325 Helpfulness rating:  quote: Originally posted by sirax likin this. well benny page .reminded me of everyman benny page remix for sum reason. good work man hellz yea! thanks mate __ follow me here: http://soundcloud.com/dannylo 22-02-2010 03:03 Restriction Newbie Registration Date: 10-02-2010 Posts: 8 Just another dope track by the dLO! Its has a great rolling vibe! Look forward to the next! 22-02-2010 03:28 Uberchile www.myspace.com/uberchile Registration Date: 14-05-2007 Posts: 294 Helpfulness rating:  Sub is drowing out the kick for me which takes alot of the punch from the drum beat. Nice arrangement tho. Its not my cup of tea tho. Still, cool track. -UC- __ www.myspace.com/uberchile 22-02-2010 22:28 Muad'Dib Andrejnalin Registration Date: 02-12-2003 Posts: 4,197 Helpfulness rating:  Interesting tune. A bit aloof and 'distanced', if that's the right word. It does sound a lot like jungle -> dnb era, maybe 93`-96`. The bass is typical jungle-like, but the melody is a bit off key with the vocals. Can be noticed at 02:46, for example. try changing some of the notes (some of the high ones, if you write them, I could point you to the exact ones that sound off to me). It has a nice sound abound, but I don't like the snare that much. Not snappy enough anyways. But it works. It's a matter of taste, of course. Maybe force the kick a bit more, it is a bit quiet. All in all, a good tune. Keep on! __ Thinking about becoming an Image-Line/FL Studio customer? Want a 10% reduction in price? Use this affiliate link: http://affiliate.image-line.com/BADEBDG473 There is no such thing without its opposite -Bene Gesserit 23-02-2010 01:01 m-ej Master Producer Registration Date: 08-05-2008 Posts: 637 Helpfulness rating:  ez m8, "spoken word" as a title would work quite nicley snare seems like its a bit heavy weight compared to the nice kick you got going on, loving the ragga vibe tho almost makes me reeeeeaaaaccccch for me rizla boh(and stuff) __ m-ej is taking a few steps back from forum life. 23-02-2010 10:09 dLO dannyLO Registration Date: 29-05-2009 Posts: 325 Helpfulness rating:  quote: Originally posted by Muad'Dib Interesting tune. A bit aloof and 'distanced', if that's the right word. It does sound a lot like jungle -> dnb era, maybe 93`-96`. i like that "distanced" term. Its supposed to have that kinda old, kinda early dub sound. quote: The bass is typical jungle-like, but the melody is a bit off key with the vocals. Can be noticed at 02:46, for example. try changing some of the notes (some of the high ones, if you write them, I could point you to the exact ones that sound off to me). yea, i went back & forth with that one- its def noticeable at that point. I just changed it up and it sounds much better. Thanks for input. I'll toss up a link to the "finished" one. peace -d- __ follow me here: http://soundcloud.com/dannylo 23-02-2010 14:45 Age Break Filth is my second name Registration Date: 30-11-2009 Posts: 465 Helpfulness rating:  now wheres my blunt? really feeling this man! feeling relax, might wanna turn that sub bit more down, pushes the kick a little but rest is dope love it man good job! the name sounds alright to me btw, __ The One - Age Break 23-02-2010 22:09 KILLER_FAN sssomebody ssstop me!!! Registration Date: 23-01-2010 Posts: 215 Helpfulness rating:  well the snare is too high in comparison with the kick. is the kick supposed to distort when doin' the rollin' stuff? the whole track is awesome. i is truly lovin it! why not naming it "Killa" as i hear it's the predominant word in the song? have a blunt. a james blunt!!! 24-02-2010 09:06 dLO dannyLO Registration Date: 29-05-2009 Posts: 325 Helpfulness rating:  Thanks for the help w/ this... "finished" (since nothing every really is permanently finished for me) track is here: http://soundcloud.com/dannylo/ten-stomp __ follow me here: http://soundcloud.com/dannylo 27-02-2010 03:39 Nick ZZ Master Producer Registration Date: 29-05-2005 Posts: 960 Helpfulness rating:  Drop is nice and full, like the bass, liked the arrangement, some spots started to become predictable. Def enjoyed the listen. z __ Nick & Erina Z http://www.beatbiz.net/artist.php?USERID=493 07-03-2010 17:44 drumnbass.be forum » Production » Tunes » dLO - Ten Stomp (ragga Jungle)