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Hidden identity 
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Registration Date: 17-02-2005
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Please check out my new track 'Bb2' and post your comments here!
This is another idea i just put down in FL.
Tell me what you think of it plz.
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I'm trying to unfuck my sig.
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13-02-2010 04:00 |
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tryptech
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love when the drums come in, thi!nk the meldoy is sometimes out of key though. the second note of the last motive of your melody, i should get another nte fot that.
Love that high pitched sounds, good track man
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13-02-2010 12:54 |
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Vly
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Intro is too simple,dont really like the atmospheres.Drum roll at 0:32 is kinda scary ;o Melody is kind of chaotic and bass isnt really defined.You should also work on your drums more..
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13-02-2010 18:42 |
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Hidden identity
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Originally posted by tryptech
love when the drums come in, thi!nk the meldoy is sometimes out of key though. the second note of the last motive of your melody, i should get another nte fot that.
Love that high pitched sounds, good track man
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I'm so glad that you liked my song.
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| Intro is too simple,dont really like the atmospheres.Drum roll at 0:32 is kinda scary ;o Melody is kind of chaotic and bass isnt really defined.You should also work on your drums more.. |
Do you have FL? Maybe you could help me upgrade the track.
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13-02-2010 21:36 |
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Vly
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14-02-2010 18:42 |
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recon47
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Good start mate not too sure about the glitchy guitar in the intro. The snare tail is a little long for me but its what u like i suppose. The Gothic type Organ u got going is great but when it comes in its a bit sudden, mabey bring it in with a bit of volume automation just to try and ease the transition. Arrange is good really dig the track in general,the mix could do with a bit of love e.g EQ,levels ect ect.. it just sounds like its been thrown on top of each other and its not all working in the mix. The wide feel of the track i like too.Overall you got the stucture for a good release Keep it up man...Peace
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14-02-2010 21:13 |
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SICKorWELL
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Registration Date: 24-09-2009
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keep it up man good ideas
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''Music is my life and DnB is my soul"
free 320 downloads and mixes at
www.myspace.com/sickorwell
Artist info www.Pruvenmusic.com
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15-02-2010 00:35 |
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BattleDrone
2161... the future.
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Structure needs work.
The drumrolls with panning on them don't fit to the rest of the drums around 2' there's way too much stuff going on. Keep things more simple.
Keep at it, practice makes master.
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