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tryptech 
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10-02-2010 16:55 |
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BattleDrone
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Those "old computer style bleeps" could be louder and could use a tiny bit reverb.
The hi-end of the drums could do with a little bit of stereo to fill out the room. Maybe you could layer on a not too loud hihat and give it a bit of panning, some hits slightly to the left, some to slightly the right.
Sweet tune, would even sound better with a vocal.
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10-02-2010 17:20 |
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tryptech
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Fast review man, jeah my vocal collection is kind of narrow, thnx for the tips.
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10-02-2010 17:23 |
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analysiss
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Good stuff i look foward to hearing the finished product
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10-02-2010 19:19 |
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m-ej
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great the hear some nice liquid vibes at last 
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10-02-2010 20:34 |
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dLO
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nice tune. like the real smooth liquid-y vibe.
I agree that some vox may help. Also, the strings that come in around ~0:20... i might do a nice volume envelope on those so they don't come in so abruptly. Love how the break changes up at 1:05 subtle but effective. Also, maybe some movement on your pads, strings. some subtle panning back/forth could be help. I'd consider making that sub a little more prominent maybe knock the OSC down on it a bit so it flows a little smoother
Overall, nice vibe Nice work!
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11-02-2010 01:12 |
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kanibalboy
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cool beat. cool sounds. aewsome pads/ambiance stuff. nice bass. nice melodys too. great track dude.
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11-02-2010 05:05 |
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wrm
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Those hipassed hihats (around 0:17) are way too loud, hurting my ears actually. Oh, dont like that wobling bass, its just so played out. The sample in the breakdown (piano-like hits) is badly timestretched and you can hear it cuting itself before the end of each few bars. You got pretty standard liquid tune here (standard in a way that it sounds like a dozens of liquid tunes out there). Like the reversed piano sample though.
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11-02-2010 19:00 |
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Hidden identity
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I liked your song.
I think it needs more strings and pads to play along with the piano, to make it sound fuller. Just a suggestion, feel free not to.
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13-02-2010 02:34 |
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Vly
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I like the vibe here.Yeah as wrm said the wobbly-liquidy-bass is too played out,but it never gets old(i could listen to tunes with it being there 24/7 and never get tired of it 
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Track is overall pretty nice, enjoyed it,mate 
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13-02-2010 18:47 |
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cynik
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starts off nice, who needs intro
not a fan of pianos, they got to be something special imo to be any good and yours sounds really bland
it all sounds just too standard, vague melodies with familiar wobbling basses. there are no errors in mixdown
needs some twist, somethign to make it memorable, as it is pretty sterile
sorry to sound harsh its only my honest opinnion. its still a decent tune just dont have anything extra something
from your style I assume you like Ghosts tunes?
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14-02-2010 19:27 |
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tryptech
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man, no prob with being honest, youre right its kind of bland, but cant get those piano staps more energetic, i m still learning to mix it down better. No dont really know ghost.
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14-02-2010 23:07 |
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SICKorWELL
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not bad man i dig it good tune very nice
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15-02-2010 00:33 |
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cynik
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Originally posted by tryptech
man, no prob with being honest, youre right its kind of bland, but cant get those piano staps more energetic, i m still learning to mix it down better. No dont really know ghost. |
yeh he kind of goes with the similar style imho. thats actually a complimetn since he makes kickass tunes
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15-02-2010 10:45 |
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Chinensis
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First of all, i like the use of the piano- it gives the tune a nice feel to it and i think a big exciting string along with it would make it even better in my opinion. The bassline is ok and it fits in with the track nicely but its not the most exciting. I do think the title fits the track really well though and i got a few images in my head of a nice sunny day in the fields- bit cheesy i know but its a feel good tune! I also think it could be a little longer because its quite short for drum & bass.
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17-02-2010 12:50 |
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Nick ZZ
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Nice vibes. The drumz are comming through well. The beeps can use a little delay & reverb to create depth. The open hat might sound a little better if it is missplaced or moved around every few bars.
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17-02-2010 13:53 |
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