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10-02-2010 14:14 |
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tryptech
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Love the intro, very catchy, but tha bass sound like some old techno love that vibe, beats are comin in
huge bass engineering, nice work, waitin for break now,
snare could be tight, that rally high synth destoys my ears, it has too much high, sanre is little too silent, love your bass edits
i hear you spent a lot of time in makin those sound, just work some more on teh drums, that would definately benefit the track
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10-02-2010 17:00 |
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Glodaragz
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This tune sound good,but is very boring(i know that the tune is not finished yet) but u should play more instruments.Also the intro is boring too.if u keep it in this way,the tune should be 2 minutes not 6.Put some pad(if the tune have pad,sorry).I like the beat,it's not same.You should play more bass.Make a sub bass too,i don't think u have,but if u have sorry,i can't hear it on my headphones.Keep working,and made this tune short,and then will be good.Don't insult this is just my honestly opinion,it's with all good intention!
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10-02-2010 17:12 |
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kanibalboy
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yea, nice drums. great start for sure. sounds are nice and grimey. yea, nice n grimey. i like this!
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11-02-2010 05:03 |
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Chinensis
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I am liking the intro because it gets your heart pumping a bit faster in anticipation for a big bassline or something like that but the loop at the start gets drowned out too quickly and the bassline that eventually arrives isn't really that exciting, but then again im more into growly reese basslines myself. It does get a bit repetitive after a while though until the 4 minute mark where there is a decent change into just the sub. It is well made, just needs a dash of something else to get you dancing along rather than waiting for the next track. I might have to listen to it a few more times because some tracks take a few listens until you start liking them more.
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17-02-2010 13:06 |
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additive
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Thanks everyone! I really agree with all of these opinions... The unfortunate thing is that I really messed up the workflow of the project, and mixed down the channels too soon from the synth, and deleted them, so it's going to be near impossible to fix!
The sub-bass didn't work (as I produced it on headphones), and I'm just depressed about it now! It should have been in the next G down (instead of D)... then the sub bass would have worked!!
Oh well, you learn from mistakes like this. So we'll see what happens with the next track
Thanks again for checking it out and giving me your feedback!
Cheers
-Nick
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