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alternate force 
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Please check out my new track 'I See Ur Friend !!!' and post your comments here!
ez all 
... i havent posted a track on here 4 a long time ... in a bit of a dilemer with this , i made it and was told to put a better drop on it which i did ... hopefully u can tell me if u think it could be better .. i cant really see what i can do to make it more better .. and i feel if i put another bassline on the drop it would detract from to start of it too much .. not sure please let me know ... cheers ... peace !!
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09-02-2010 15:16 |
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BattleDrone
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Somehow the mixdown sounds a tad muddy and the snare sounds like it has 2 different attacks which were not layered correctly. If this is intended then never mind.
There isn't a real drop right now, I would start hi-passing the bass several bars before the drop (automation) and then at the drop add a sub underneath to make it bang bigtime.
Some variations in the bass pattern (every 8th bar or so would make it more attractive to the dancefloor).
Sweet atmosphere it sounds pretty trance-like.
Really nicely arranged and interesting all the way.
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09-02-2010 15:34 |
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rez
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i agree with battledrone, something is wrong with the snare... track starts out very niceley though, liking the pad and the bass.
i dont really thing that the bass needs to change... dunno i like it that way, there are enough changes that keep the track interesting :o but yeah, the drop could have a more upfront element... as in sub or a different synth... maybe vocals... your choice xD
nice track though!
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10-02-2010 12:17 |
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alternate force
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Originally posted by rez
i agree with battledrone, something is wrong with the snare... track starts out very niceley though, liking the pad and the bass.
i dont really thing that the bass needs to change... dunno i like it that way, there are enough changes that keep the track interesting :o but yeah, the drop could have a more upfront element... as in sub or a different synth... maybe vocals... your choice xD
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thanks mate .. i mean thats what i was going 4 .. im well aware nowa days that tunes need more variation (more than aware) i always put loads of variations in my tracks now .. but i feel it went along nicely ... i did make changes every few bars .. i will try to put a sub on the drop something different .. not sure wether it will work thou and it must the crash on the snare that sounds funny .. i will change !!
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10-02-2010 12:51 |
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tryptech
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Snare sounds little flanged
love your atmos is very nice
that bass is great, nice sounds man, just clear up the mixdown some how, i would cut some en of the kick & snare, en throw zome middle frequencies away from that bass or sidechain teh snere to it, cuz it can hardly breath, but the atmos is fucking nice, has lots of potential.
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10-02-2010 17:11 |
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kanibalboy
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nice intro. awesome beat. nice and full too. great fx. damn dude awesome track. i always love filtery arpy thingys. sounds sick!
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11-02-2010 05:01 |
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freddy reeks
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Yea another b line would detract from to start, its pretty chilled right so no need 4 a big smashin drop, plays thru nice, imo.
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11-02-2010 10:10 |
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Glodaragz
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I like the idea!Sound Really nice,one bad think: The beat is same in 90% of the tune.The Snare is weird.I like the intro.Bass line is good.I'm not listening any hit-hats you should put hit-hats.Nice job!Make it more than this
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11-02-2010 17:33 |
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recon47
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Really like the drums....Punchy!! Although i think theres too much reverb on the snare or if theres reverb on a send buss youve got too much on it or it may be the sample dont know, but the snare gets lost in the mix a bit it sits too far back for me. The rest of the tune Pads Effects use of delays the melody are all good man. Not too sure about the drop my monitors are'nt pushing a whole lot of Bass out but could just be the speakers. The bass line could do with some variation as the tune goes along i think you got a stabby mid range bass with a layerd sine or pulse cant quite make it out but i think it needs to change up a bit mabey every 16 to 32 bars because its a bit samey all the way through. Also the Arp you got going on in the intro section is a good choice of sound works really well with the pad mabey come from the same synth? Overall sound of the track is good you seem to know what your doing as far as EQ work goes everything to me sits well in the mix and nothing sounds too boosted witch is good overall good track quite trancey!!
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