drumnbass.be forum » Production » Tunes » Age Break - God Age Break - God Author Post Age Break Filth is my second name Registration Date: 30-11-2009 Posts: 465 Helpfulness rating:  Please check out my new track 'God' and post your comments here! heyy guys, bit darkish track, got inspiration from: faith - Current Value. hope you enjoy needs some tweaking, and don't like the synth that well yet, tips? __ The One - Age Break 09-02-2010 07:14 BattleDrone 2161... the future. Registration Date: 30-12-2005 Posts: 6,413 Helpfulness rating:  No panning on snares please. Mix sounds muffled, the snares sound very flat. The snares are also too much in the foreground at times, they just cover up all other sounds. Vocal sounds very unprocessed and it's a bit boring. Not sure if it is a good idea to drop everything when a vocal gets played. __ Check my soundcloud (exclusive tracks on there) 09-02-2010 15:37 Age Break Filth is my second name Registration Date: 30-11-2009 Posts: 465 Helpfulness rating:  quote: Originally posted by BattleDrone No panning on snares please. Mix sounds muffled, the snares sound very flat. The snares are also too much in the foreground at times, they just cover up all other sounds. Vocal sounds very unprocessed and it's a bit boring. Not sure if it is a good idea to drop everything when a vocal gets played. I don't hear or panned my snares ? only thing in the drums I've panned are the hihats, might sound like a snare to you? but gonna work on this one some more thanks for your review __ The One - Age Break 09-02-2010 16:32 Glodaragz Cool Producer Registration Date: 26-06-2009 Posts: 161 Helpfulness rating:  sound so creapy,good work,nice work with cebra saw (sytrus bass ),maybe u should put more heavy snare.I like the melody,the tune is good any way,with little changes will be perfect!Good bass vibes,this tunes will be good for heavy parties ,keep it that way! 10-02-2010 16:46 tryptech Tryptech Registration Date: 16-08-2006 Posts: 853 Helpfulness rating:  First of all, love current value think he's really talented. I hear some elments in your track, but the mixdown isnt tight enough. Vocal is nice. That snare needs too sound like a basseball being smashed to pieces agains a cymbal or something like that. Its also a little too fast and after the breakdown ist really muddy. So clear some frequencies, you should rzeally seprate sub from the bass, zou you can layer a more thin sound over a fat sub. succes __ ANALOGUE (Tryptech) 10-02-2010 17:27 Age Break Filth is my second name Registration Date: 30-11-2009 Posts: 465 Helpfulness rating:  quote: Originally posted by Glodaragz sound so creapy,good work,nice work with cebra saw (sytrus bass ),maybe u should put more heavy snare.I like the melody,the tune is good any way,with little changes will be perfect!Good bass vibes,this tunes will be good for heavy parties ,keep it that way! thanks man __ The One - Age Break 10-02-2010 19:02 Age Break Filth is my second name Registration Date: 30-11-2009 Posts: 465 Helpfulness rating:  quote: Originally posted by tryptech First of all, love current value think he's really talented. I hear some elments in your track, but the mixdown isnt tight enough. Vocal is nice. That snare needs too sound like a basseball being smashed to pieces agains a cymbal or something like that. Its also a little too fast and after the breakdown ist really muddy. So clear some frequencies, you should rzeally seprate sub from the bass, zou you can layer a more thin sound over a fat sub. succes yeah I know I really have to work on my mixing skills / mastering skills. but practise makes perfect they say, so I'm just gonna keep trying thanks for your review! __ The One - Age Break 10-02-2010 19:03 kanibalboy Cool Producer Registration Date: 28-06-2005 Posts: 166 Helpfulness rating:  snare is a little muddy. add a nice snappy one on top of it. great sample. awesome bass line/well written note/melody to it. yep, love the bass. this track is brutal dude. 11-02-2010 04:58 Age Break Filth is my second name Registration Date: 30-11-2009 Posts: 465 Helpfulness rating:  quote: Originally posted by kanibalboy snare is a little muddy. add a nice snappy one on top of it. great sample. awesome bass line/well written note/melody to it. yep, love the bass. this track is brutal dude. thanks man will remix/remaster this one and improve my snare __ The One - Age Break 11-02-2010 08:08 cynik Cp6uja Registration Date: 15-03-2005 Posts: 5,646 Helpfulness rating:  cool dark start to it beats sound really distant in the intro and with imo unnecessary reverb drops cool but the drums are what sounds liek drowned in fx, I hear distortion and reverbs, thats a bitch to get right. the trick is making one balance out the other by giving it more presence ont he other hand you only hear the bass when th edrums go off like the stuttered drums at 05:40, why not try that on the vocals too? to sum it I can hear what youre going for, and most of it is done right. keep working it __ https://soundcloud.com/tsai-vidro-voves 14-02-2010 19:35 Age Break Filth is my second name Registration Date: 30-11-2009 Posts: 465 Helpfulness rating:  quote: Originally posted by cynik cool dark start to it beats sound really distant in the intro and with imo unnecessary reverb drops cool but the drums are what sounds liek drowned in fx, I hear distortion and reverbs, thats a bitch to get right. the trick is making one balance out the other by giving it more presence ont he other hand you only hear the bass when th edrums go off like the stuttered drums at 05:40, why not try that on the vocals too? to sum it I can hear what youre going for, and most of it is done right. keep working it thanks man still working on this puppy have to get more strict with myself, I notice that when I (especially when I start) make a tune everything is alright if it sounds oke. have to get rid with that lol , but I'll post the polished version of this track in a couple of months I guess. __ The One - Age Break 14-02-2010 20:21 drumnbass.be forum » Production » Tunes » Age Break - God