drumnbass.be forum » Production » Tunes » ajaxbeats - Knuckle Head ajaxbeats - Knuckle Head Author Post ajaxbeats Producer Registration Date: 04-02-2010 Posts: 26 Helpfulness rating:  Please check out my new track 'Knuckle Head' and post your comments here! Peace from Brooklyn Ny USA. Did this a few days ago. Its a first draft. Seeing how the people feel about it. No major drops or ant thing. I think it pretty dope though __ http://soundcloud.com/ajaxbeats/mesinger-breakdown 07-02-2010 22:08 Age Break Filth is my second name Registration Date: 30-11-2009 Posts: 465 Helpfulness rating:  nice man you've got some dope ideas in there, like the synth, makes you feel relax the drums are good, love the kick, and snare is good too, keep it up __ The One - Age Break 07-02-2010 22:23 BattleDrone 2161... the future. Registration Date: 30-12-2005 Posts: 6,413 Helpfulness rating:  Almost everything is too loud, causing clipping and distortion. Your beats sound very rough, too much loud snares in them. Those vocals need some fixing. To me they sound like people in total panic or something, maybe add some delay & reverb. __ Check my soundcloud (exclusive tracks on there) 07-02-2010 23:52 Age Break Filth is my second name Registration Date: 30-11-2009 Posts: 465 Helpfulness rating:  quote: Originally posted by BattleDrone To me they sound like people in total panic or something ROFL __ The One - Age Break 08-02-2010 00:09 ajaxbeats Producer Registration Date: 04-02-2010 Posts: 26 Helpfulness rating:  thanks for the response. Workin on it. Will add more elements and mix it down a bit. add a few builds. I got 5 days ill post the finished track friday. Or ill put it on my sound cloud. __ http://soundcloud.com/ajaxbeats/mesinger-breakdown 08-02-2010 00:25 dLO dannyLO Registration Date: 29-05-2009 Posts: 325 Helpfulness rating:  I kinda dig the "total panic" vox actually. Maybe some delay and slight panning may help. This tune's got potential fo sho. To me its got a liquid-y jungle vibe, which is pretty unique. Def work on drops, but i wouldn't go nuts w/ too much fx. It really works as a very minimalist track. post the final version fo sho. btw. nice to another state-sider (not sure where everybody's from). I'm born & raised Chi-town __ follow me here: http://soundcloud.com/dannylo 08-02-2010 03:59 ajaxbeats Producer Registration Date: 04-02-2010 Posts: 26 Helpfulness rating:  I see you. I think i might have scrapped that. Started working on something else. Trying to get a format down in ableton live. __ http://soundcloud.com/ajaxbeats/mesinger-breakdown 08-02-2010 10:16 m-ej Master Producer Registration Date: 08-05-2008 Posts: 637 Helpfulness rating:  nice pads for the intro . beats are pushing a little too hard and distorting. snare just ripps through everything but not in a nice way. vox is working well. just a case of re-adjusting the level of the beats so that they dont crush everything and your away sir. __ m-ej is taking a few steps back from forum life. 08-02-2010 10:39 analysiss Producer Registration Date: 02-10-2009 Posts: 90 Helpfulness rating:  tighten this up and it will be a nice intro,lacks progression and loose that crazy man doesn't work like the way u programme ur beats seem to roll nice 09-02-2010 21:37 tryptech Tryptech Registration Date: 16-08-2006 Posts: 853 Helpfulness rating:  I love the clearness of you rmix, but drums sound a little complex, like theyre fighting with each other. Just keep the two main snares, yoru track wil benefit from it. But overall good track, your score is wrong haha, greetz en keep them rollin __ ANALOGUE (Tryptech) 10-02-2010 17:31 kanibalboy Cool Producer Registration Date: 28-06-2005 Posts: 166 Helpfulness rating:  awesome beat. awesome bass. i like it. good female vocal thingys. great work my friend. 11-02-2010 04:53 recon47 Recon Registration Date: 05-01-2009 Posts: 169 Helpfulness rating:  Man before u go any further sort ur levels out ur gonna bust ur ears,the sub kick u got goin on is distorted and its messing up the mix!!!an the rest of ur levels r just tooooo high.The synth thing is too over powering and needs a bit of attention with EQ its very top heavy and harsh on the ears mate.The drums are too hot aswell,dont run the channels into the red and buss kicks/snares,percussion to seperate channels and bring the levels down so as not to clip the stereo outchannel.No offence, i like where its going, the melody sounds good and the drums could be fat but gentle processing as u go helps a whole lot. Also sounds really phasey check ur sample rate is set to 16/32bit and if u have ASIO check the host DAW u use knows this,also the vocal thing u use is drenched in reverb,be carefull of this because reverb gets lost in the mix and makes it sound messy, it pulls everything in the same range down with it. Apart from that i know its a first draft and i look forward to hearing the final edid.....Peace!! 14-02-2010 18:45 drumnbass.be forum » Production » Tunes » ajaxbeats - Knuckle Head