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heyy guys, a track that I'm working on, I'd like to hear what should change etc. maybe some tips would come in handy too. still need to learn and all, as I'm an begining artist. so please help me out! thanks
Nice build. Like the automation. Dealing with alot of bass its hard sometimes to get it all super clear. I hear the idea. Definitely feeling it. Wish i woulda heard this in konkrete jungle nyc on monday nite. What program do you use? Lots of nice sequences. I think thats what im missing in my tracks.
Originally posted by ajaxbeats
Nice build. Like the automation. Dealing with alot of bass its hard sometimes to get it all super clear. I hear the idea. Definitely feeling it. Wish i woulda heard this in konkrete jungle nyc on monday nite. What program do you use? Lots of nice sequences. I think thats what im missing in my tracks.
I use Fl studio 8 man, most people say it's crap lol
but when you understand the programm you can do sick things with it.
Originally posted by ajaxbeats
Nice build. Like the automation. Dealing with alot of bass its hard sometimes to get it all super clear. I hear the idea. Definitely feeling it. Wish i woulda heard this in konkrete jungle nyc on monday nite. What program do you use? Lots of nice sequences. I think thats what im missing in my tracks.
I use Fl studio 8 man, most people say it's crap lol
but when you understand the programm you can do sick things with it.
Drumlines are really messy, especially around 1:10. You just put in too much kicks and snares. The weird pitching of the basslines sounds of tone.
Needs work. Cut the low end of the vocal.
Less stereo on bass.
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Originally posted by BattleDrone
Drumlines are really messy, especially around 1:10. You just put in too much kicks and snares. The weird pitching of the basslines sounds of tone.
Needs work. Cut the low end of the vocal.
Less stereo on bass.
as battle said I've done the changes, kick comes out more clearny now changing the bass stereo
made the breaks cleaner, although you only hear the big diffrences with the kicks, which I have to say were suckey any ways lol, 5 kicks in a row in a normal break
sounds horrible rofl
bassline pitch sorted out, had to place it a note higher, as it wasn't the say note as the low note. (used slide with that btw so fl users understand me I hope)
will need more improvement though
pretty chaotic man ! beats need sum attention soundin really smashy too many kicks in there is that a cerbera saw bass in sytrus? i used to b an fl user nd it sounds familiar that vocal needs sumthing more high end mayby take off sum lo end nice effort tho man 4 beginner
Originally posted by sirax
pretty chaotic man ! beats need sum attention soundin really smashy too many kicks in there is that a cerbera saw bass in sytrus? i used to b an fl user nd it sounds familiar that vocal needs sumthing more high end mayby take off sum lo end nice effort tho man 4 beginner
thanks man
I changed drums already, sounded like crap indeed.
yeah it is cebera saw lol
I'm gonna get reason 4, and rewire the thor synht one day, and get albino too. need to start learning how to make some nerofunk basses with those lol
with the key is to keep on trying, so I will
be prepared for more crappy tunes from me in the future lol
Hmm. A lot of great elements but i think this needs some attention to cleanliness. THe drums all seem to be fillers and are chaotic mate. If you had a rolling beat for the majority with some of the crazy amen glitch beats here and there --- this thing would be ruthless. Good job though. What did you use...?
Originally posted by defy
Hmm. A lot of great elements but i think this needs some attention to cleanliness. THe drums all seem to be fillers and are chaotic mate. If you had a rolling beat for the majority with some of the crazy amen glitch beats here and there --- this thing would be ruthless. Good job though. What did you use...?
thanks man
what do you mean with what did you use?, software.. vsti.. samples?
i would recomend thor for neuro funk i am a reason 4 user now i find it so much better than fl albino cannot b used in reason it is an awesome synth 4 dubstep bass though i would recomend using reason
Big Ups mate this is great ( great i mean- Tune-Your age). Maybe you should change the beat,But just a little change.So HC,Really i like it!And maybe you should change the bass, i can feel,Def. that is CebraSaw or maybe Satan FM (Same sound i think).I'm an artist too, little older than you, and offcorse a beginer.
Originally posted by sirax
i would recomend thor for neuro funk i am a reason 4 user now i find it so much better than fl albino cannot b used in reason it is an awesome synth 4 dubstep bass though i would recomend using reason
I know man I'm gonna get reason for the synth, saw some vids on youtube and I was amazed by the sound you get outa it, but have to upgrade my PC first. than I'll rewire reason into fl I guess. also malstrom seems nice synth.
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but when you understand the programm you can do sick things with it.
