Sick sounds, atmosphere is nice and very spacy, certainly one of your best tracks, i listened quite a few of them on youtube. Love your mastering. Its really tight. Bass could do with some less end, maybe some shorter cuts, but its glues the song well togheter. Love the metalheadz kind of sound it has.
I can hear you've put a lot of effort into this.
Some points of criticism:
- The bass could sound more "alive", at some points it sounds very straightforward and it gets repetitive. Some more filter action or cut off envelope combined with automation would have helped.
- This tune could benefit from more action outside the main path (meaning blips, blops, swooshes, astronauts talking in low quality and what not) this would also give the tune a stronger identity which is somewhat missing now. Hence the problem to find a name or suggest one.
Anyway, purely technical it is a very clean and good production but you could do more with the tune so don't consider my comments to be negative, it's just an attempt to put the icing on the cake.
I've also set the tune from preview to normal.
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Originally posted by tryptech
Bass could do with some less end,
Ehh?
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Originally posted by BattleDrone
Anyway, purely technical it is a very clean and good production but you could do more with the tune so don't consider my comments to be negative, it's just an attempt to put the icing on the cake.
some nice spacey kinda vocal in the breakdown would really set this track off.
loving the atmos and the whole production.
sounds to me like something is orbiting something,
(but i have flu so everything is orbiting my head at the mo)
ahh theres a possible name right there,,,,,,,,"Oribt"
and if your following the "O" connection (last tune was Objects yeah)?
just a thought m8.
(btw i love objects, sunday morning skin up vibe, real sweet track m8.)
peace n chips n that
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This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by m-ej: 31-01-2010 08:55.
wow man! in begin I thought hmm, boring softy track, but than the bass kicked in and it was like sick!, reminds me of tajitsu from noisia ft. dom & ronald, they have this well quite soft intro and than BAM! good job on that acctually
great job on doing it with 3xosc, i hate that thing, never get the sound i want out it, maybe post a Tut on youtube how to master it? but respect for that man! now about your drums, could have bene more exciting but they fit the song good so wont be a prik on that, like how to kick is still hearable when the bass kicks in, which you couldnt say off all songs lol
your snare could have more punch too, but thats my opinion i like snares that sound like people's head gets smashed in with something snappy lol
nice tense intro, like it. great percussion i think too. nice bass. great tune man! you should call this "upper cut" as it makes me want to punch someone in the face!
your far too heavey on the bassline man,back it down a bit. u start throwin too much shit over the track stuff gets lost....FACT!!!! Calm it down in that range and u can have urself a better track!!!!
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