 Vly - Crawlers (preview) |
Vly 
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Registration Date: 22-10-2009
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Please check out my new track 'Crawlers (preview)' and post your comments here!
Yup it is less than 2 mins,its just a cut ;d Again i tried to catch that dark vibe and recreate it..so enjoy and comment please 
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20-01-2010 10:56 |
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BattleDrone
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Registration Date: 30-12-2005
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Very original sound.
Mixdown could be a bit louder.
Drumroll before the drop sounds a bit messy.
Drop could be a bit more powerful.
Like it.
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20-01-2010 14:12 |
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Gregg
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Agree to the others!
I think the overall direction for this tunes has been already set, just needs work and polishing.
Your focus should be on achieving a fuller sound. First, upgrade the elements you already have; layer your beats (!), especially kick and snare need a lot more presence. Second, fill out the frequency spectrum by adding more stuff like a pad or a lead sound.
Your bass stabs/hits seem to be panned. I’d rather keep those mono and create the required stereo by widening the pad (that you’ll hopefully add) or by panning some percussions.
The buildup needs extension. The white-noise buildup sound is too calm and too short. make it louder, and add layers for more depth. Don’t like your drumroll neiter, if you can’t find something better kill it or replace it with a reverse crash.
keep working.
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20-01-2010 20:38 |
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Vly
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Registration Date: 22-10-2009
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Thanks for the advice all of ya
Gonna finish it and post the end result in a couple of days ( i hope ;o )
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20-01-2010 22:23 |
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kanibalboy
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Registration Date: 28-06-2005
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sounds good bro. like the idea. you should add to it. i would say reinforce it make it heavy.
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21-01-2010 07:02 |
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c_ctrl
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This sounds pretty fresh,the beat is sweet, I like the snappy short sounds.Keep going with it mate, I'd like to see where this one ends up!
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21-01-2010 13:00 |
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TEST
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Registration Date: 25-09-2007
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TOO QUITE WAS MY 1ST IMPRESSION
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21-01-2010 17:03 |
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mr morgan
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Registration Date: 04-10-2009
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You need to boost up the drums n bass,Try resampling.
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29-01-2010 16:37 |
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