 Skarrz - Break Yo'self |
Skarrz
Producer
Registration Date: 16-01-2010
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Please check out my new track 'Break Yo'self' and post your comments here!
Ok, this is my first track. 100% made by me using ableton live. Hope you like!
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17-01-2010 20:13 |
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Paracyte 
Crazy Bouncin Sinusoid
Registration Date: 07-12-2006
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Start with this brakebeat is very dry, compression is eating the drum loop, it need a lot of work,
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17-01-2010 21:39 |
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Skarrz
Producer
Registration Date: 16-01-2010
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Ok, where do you suggest i start? I have been producing for 3 days so i still gota lot to learn. Any advice is much appreciated
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17-01-2010 21:51 |
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BattleDrone
2161... the future.
Registration Date: 30-12-2005
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Intro is not very entertaining.
Once it gets running it's quite ok. I like your basslines. Drums are very weak. Use some breakbeat to layer on top. Snare sounds all floppy.
Keep it up, there's hope :bigup
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17-01-2010 23:41 |
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pusha
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ok 4 a first stab u could av done a lot worse mate.dont like that break sample sounds like a dog barking. intro is pretty lack lustre. bass is nearly there . really needs some more drum layers in there really bad.over compressed a bit .off to a good start stick with it keeps postin stuff the feedback u get goes a long way in ur progression as a producer lookin 4 ward to hearing next 1.
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18-01-2010 00:35 |
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Skarrz
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Registration Date: 16-01-2010
Posts: 8
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Thanks for the feedback evry1, maybe i rushed this one lol. Gona get some new ideas 2gether and starsomething new
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18-01-2010 12:56 |
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c_ctrl
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Ok, the intro is bland at the moment, you need to get some atmosphere going on in this, have a look at some pad presets in the synths you're using and see how they're made... then make your own 
the beat is pretty static at the moment, doesn't really have any roll to it. The best way to describe it is to get an amen break and hi pass it and just stick it over your beat. Changes the dynamic completely so note what it does, if you like it or not, and then either try and it with your own breaks or find another break which you might think could work ( or just use the Amen. Everyone loves an Amen 
) As for the bassline, it's got a fairly good sound to it so it's just a case of fine tuning and playing around! Hope at least some of that was a little bit helpful.
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20-01-2010 02:34 |
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Vly
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