 dLO - Poison Ivy (liquid To Dark) |
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dannyLO
Registration Date: 29-05-2009
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Please check out my new track 'Poison Ivy (liquid To Dark)' and post your comments here!
hey .be crew
been working on this for a few weeks now...
a little off the beaten path for me (i pref. dark, minimalist jungle)
anyways, plz load up the comments/criticisms
esp on mix.
all samples & vox are royalty free, btw
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follow me here:
http://soundcloud.com/dannylo
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15-01-2010 18:51 |
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pusha
waveform molester
Registration Date: 07-01-2010
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love the string work on this 1 matey av to say second drop got me man although i would say bring the level of the drum roll down a tad it kinda goes from screamin loud to serene landscape in a couple of seconds wkd track here love all high hat and sybal work as well
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buy the ticket take the ride
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15-01-2010 19:11 |
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olseiler
Newbie
Registration Date: 16-01-2010
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nice build up, not sure about the generic drum roll though. Synth maybe needs a little more punch in the verses. Maybe the change is a bit too abrupt. Even though Im listening to it in a pretty hi def sound system, maybe the levels are drowning the mid/bass a bit.
Vocals are sweet. nice FX and samples. Nice off beat rhythm. Out of the others heard probably the best. Would totally buy.
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16-01-2010 07:36 |
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Paracyte
Crazy Bouncin Sinusoid
Registration Date: 07-12-2006
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Hi
Love the vibe on the start of the tune, vocals fit nicely, maybe bring the basedrum a litte up, but it may be only my shitty headphones, that flute section (i guess it is flute?) is not fitted in tempo sometimes and you can hear that esspecially on in the sequence when it hit 3rd time, (check 0:39) and it is allways like that thru whole track. except this this is a great tune, i really love the chilled vibe with tha tiger claw time to time 
keep them comin'
bigups.
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16-01-2010 11:57 |
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Rev. Truth
Producer
Registration Date: 16-01-2010
Posts: 7
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Intresting build up and drop into the mix. I love the vocal and the synth. only thing the synth could have used a change of pace in pitch or tone somewhere down the line. It grew a little predictible. I think you you hit the nail on the head at the end of the song with the change of pace and sound just wish that would have came in play some where in the middle of the trax, would have worked great as a break. All I can say is just keep makeing music you want to hear and that your happy with because thats all that matters.
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16-01-2010 19:47 |
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