iv jus realizer i av made a school boy error with the composition that i must av made at the end when messin about at the end after the first drop the kicks roll through so it soundz like it is drop in into the break
i have corrected this so please take that into consideration cheers.
Alright, various things that I think would improve this track. Idk if its just me put the snare feels like it could be eq'ed better but it sounds good. The hats sound really good they make it nice and fast paced sounding. One thing I really dont like though is the bass. Scr*w the lfo man. just manually modulate. If yur gonna lfo then lfo a light bandstop filter around the mids. Another thing that would improve build ups is have a synth pitchbending upwards around your kick rolls. I like the bass around like 4:13 though, bring that up. That shud be yur main bass imo. Another thing I recommend is that the track sounds a bit plain. You could layer a pad in the bg possibly. Again the only weakness here is with that main bass, and build up really
Its not a bad trax at all. The bass line could use some varity it was a litte repitive. Towards the end you broke up the bass line would have like to hear a little more of that through out the trax. Maybe even a little change in drums. It just seemed that it went on and on. I did like some of the other elements in the trax. Do feel like this trax has a lot of good points to out weigh the bad. Good overall production. All i can say is keep up the fight and never stop makeing music you like to hear because at the end of the day as long as your happy thats all that matters!
yeh i made quite a few different styles in past but i love jump up iv grown up listenin to the likes of twisted individual distorted minds hazard gdub complex etc i love the sound here in the uk and i think anyone who listen's to the same this tune would be aimed at im not comparing myself to those producers but thaats the kind of lick i like to give my tracks gritty basses that make u wanna drill holes in childs face lol @steak johnson i wasnt goin for lfo at all .jus patternd whomp i didn think id made this to repetative tbh i tried switchin and repaternin a coupple of times but .meh cheers for the reviews ppl
cool track, listenin to it through the laptop speakers so cant go too detiled atm. beat sounds nice and punchy. Nice tack over all, i would give it more variation though, it gets a little bit repetitive. Love the grindy blines, keep it up n look foward to hearing it when its complete
Not bad, snare could use a bit more hi-mids to give it more bang. Don't pan those basses matey. Doesn't sound nice in a club.
Find the basslines a bit repetitive and the bass sounds could be a bit more original.
Mix sounds good.
__ Check my soundcloud (exclusive tracks on there)
Beat ain't too bad although I agree the snare needs more upper-mid bite. layer in a new snappier snare with a touch of distortion should brighten it up.
really like your bass sounds. So good job there.
Just like battledrone said you need to control the low end's stereo width.
what DAW you using?
IF you can use vsts get this
----->http://www.otiumfx.com/basslane.php
Beat needs lots more variations throughout the track to help keep things more interesting. too much 2 stepping as it is.
Think you need to make more of the build ups too. just having that one winding synth isnt enough imo.
BUt anyway. good stomper none the less.
Get it sounding tighter and you're onto a winner
those drums sound really frenetic man, especially with that snare, it sounds like it's taking up too much space and starts to tire on the ears.. EQ? Some of the atmosphere you got goin is sweet, all the little blippy stuff in the breakdown and when the bass drops out is my thing! The bass is definitely jump up and personally I dont like it but that could be specific to me! Keep doin it man, definitely potential in this tune.
Bassline is a bit to repetitive, needs more variation and fine tuning, but overall im liking the idea of your soundz. Nice build up at the beginning, leading to a dirty bassline. Nice second drop, gets your head spinning. A change in drums would have complemented the bass nicely, maybe after the second drop or when the bassline changes slightly. The drums are sounding nice and pumped. Not normally my thing but im quite liking this. Def high in potential to get those speakers rattling and the bass tearing at your brain. Good Job!
i have corrected this so please take that into consideration cheers.
