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phatheadz phatheadz is a male
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Please check out my new track 'Conversion' and post your comments here!

Ez all happy new year and all that,ive been trying to put stuff [tunes] together for just over a year now 15 months exactly when i get the time,heres one i started today far from complete ideas, comments and advice apprieciated thanks to all those who have listened and comment safe x
14-01-2010 01:23
BattleDrone BattleDrone is a male
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Drums are totally powerless.
The bassline is not a bassline, just a wobbly sample. Nothing happens.
The whole thing sounds very very muffled and there's a hissing noise going on.
WTF?

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14-01-2010 09:50 Homepage of BattleDrone
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random tune mate this is a minor bit repetative i would say i think ur snare hits could av been a bit more punchy how track sounds like its sunk id try and bring sum of the higher end up a little bit nice minimal approach tho

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14-01-2010 18:12
Vectrex Vectrex is a male
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Did something go wrong with the conversion to .mp3? Or when uploading it?

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14-01-2010 19:16 Homepage of Vectrex
Vly Vly is a male
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mate, i hope u didnt really mean 15 months or something went wrong with the recording ;d

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14-01-2010 20:22
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no offense man but i listened again i would also lose that sound that sounds like a dog throwing up lol jus bein honest mate

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15-01-2010 11:12
SteakJohnson SteakJohnson is a male
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first off I really the ideas youve got laid out here, but idefinately doesnt sound like a finished track. Although the fx sound great, some sound a tad offbeat but that can be easily fixed. Whole track sounds like a build up, (a great build up). I was really waiting the whole song for some really thick drums to burst in and a rolling bassline that goes with that risey synth well. Somethin really phasey and grimey sounding. Some string notes would song cool in there in the background I suppose. But when you do decide to finish this track spend a crapload of time on the kick n snare and mixin em with the bass.

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16-01-2010 18:38
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Not liking this one bit, seriously needs some work. Its too boring to listen to and the sample in the background doesnt suit the track at all, sounds like sumone constantly throwing their guts up. Its way to repetitve and the bassline has got nothing goin for it. Bass definatly needs sum work to liven it up as it sounds like the tune is strugglin to stay alive. As its a preview its work in progress so hopefully you get that bass jumpin and remove that pukin sound. Keep at it tho dude, hard work pays off.
17-01-2010 17:17
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Not liking this one bit, seriously needs some work. Its too boring to listen to and the sample in the background doesnt suit the track at all, sounds like sumone constantly throwing their guts up. Its way to repetitve and the bassline has got nothing goin for it. Bass definatly needs sum work to liven it up as it sounds like the tune is strugglin to stay alive. As its a preview its work in progress so hopefully you get that bass jumpin and remove that pukin sound. Keep at it tho dude, hard work pays off.
17-01-2010 17:18
D2o D2o is a male
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not really sure what to say. this is a bit of a mess.

sorry Frown

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18-01-2010 10:32 Homepage of D2o
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