As always you manage to make a great tune, great melodies, good choice of sounds, ...
The melody that enters around 45" (short notes) sounds to average for a tune from you, the sound is way to "preset" and the melody doesn't add up to the tune (you have set some high standards, so I judge likewise :-)).
The sound that enters at 1:51 (guitarish) is panned to the right pretty weird.
As usual I think your tune has too many different melodies which makes it hard to see the whole thing as 1 tune (2:14 sounds like a second tune getting dropped) there's to little connection between both parts to see 1 tune.
I often have this problem when composing, I run out of ideas, try something different and suddenly it's 2 songs.
Drums could be a tad louder and maybe a bit more original (layer on some sounds to make the drums more "yours".
I see you are getting close to release level with your tunes, but you need to figure out your tune structure to go for the top.
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Ill have a look to what you pointed,
Drums are allready layered but ill try,
i guess i got so many melodies as i dont want to keep repeating over nad over the same sequencies.
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i really recognize 1 of the drum loops uv used in there iv got it in a pack some where nice track man this sound like it could be a hospital release for sure nice man more of this!!!!!!!! the only thing i can say is that thick ravey sound u use is eatin drums a bit not kick snare so much but break and hats a bit
Strange thing with this break, as I layered some sounds on it so it shouldnt be so recognizable, well looks i didnt do the best,
thanks for listen.
bless.
Very surprised mate, don't mean that to sound rude.
its a near release tune as Battle said, i love it mate, those strings are lovely mate, nice punchy snare, you're sounding so much better 'production-wise' since when you started uploading here, can see a huge improvement.
the main bass sounds a little 'presety' but i can hear just how much work you put into your tracvks now, and that deserves some propa respect mate..
Nice touch with Polish
Im glad that you like this tune, Thanks for good word,
I probably could do some more processing on the bass line, but can't be bothered really hehe
No one is going to release it anyway so, i guess it is ok for now
nice! this tune rocks! i can see the club bangin on this one. its got a lot of energy. i wish i could make my bassline sound this good. nice pads n fx too.
I really like the sound of this one! It indeed has that Hospital vibe. One thing I did notice is the snare sound, I think it's a tad overcompressed and that brings out the snare higher mid frequencies too much. I think I would give it a bit more bottom, eq out the high mid a bit and give it some nice long attack and short release 'snap' compression.
Serious summer liquid vibes, makes me want to go out and rave and it's the middle of the day haha. I like the melodies, even tho there are quite a few as mentioned before, I think the key is to get a few main ideas down and then work on variations around them .. who am I to be tellin you how to work tho
nice rolling drums and solid bass. I like a lot.
nice rolling drums and solid bass. I like a lot.