drumnbass.be forum » Production » Tunes » Rux - Suplozz - Shade My Shadow Rux - Suplozz - Shade My Shadow Author Post Suplozz Rux Registration Date: 21-11-2009 Posts: 14 Please check out my new track 'Suplozz - Shade My Shadow' and post your comments here! This is my new and first track. Not the very first, i had some experiments with drum and bass for the past 5 months,but that was pure rubbish and i was toughly learning with the every source i got. I think i need master it up a bit,but i think it's ok for now. Constructive feedback appreciated! 10-01-2010 19:10 BattleDrone 2161... the future. Registration Date: 30-12-2005 Posts: 6,413 Helpfulness rating:  Not bad for a first tune. Doesn't roll enough, the beats could do with a layer of breakbeat on top. The basses sound unprocessed and empty. I can hear you've put a lot of effort into this and I notice you "feel" DnB, so keep at it. Make a lot of tunes. __ Check my soundcloud (exclusive tracks on there) 10-01-2010 20:44 Suplozz Rux Registration Date: 21-11-2009 Posts: 14 thanks for your reply. yeah,i realized the bass is really bad when i played it on my friend's monitors.. im still learning a lot.. 10-01-2010 23:14 Anarky myspace.com/ anarkyproductions Registration Date: 02-08-2009 Posts: 135 Helpfulness rating:  drumz aint too bad mate considerin how long u bin doin it-add sum mor elements n fx n stuff in ur intro jus 2 swpice it up a little bit-gets a touch repetive-64 bar intro innit?bass has big potential mate! jus need to eq it better-specially likin the groanin lead bass! tune overall cud do wiv a lot of work but good start mate-wen u got sound quality n eq'in down n that i can c sum hevvy tracks comin from u.keep practisin m8! __ 11-01-2010 12:18 kanibalboy Cool Producer Registration Date: 28-06-2005 Posts: 166 Helpfulness rating:  great idea, you should bring up the intensity of that nasty lead riff in the intro. i think its a good idea that could use some more work. 14-01-2010 01:30 SteakJohnson another 15 year old... Registration Date: 17-09-2009 Posts: 162 Helpfulness rating:  This has really good bass modulation. Only suggestion for that bass is lower the reso on the hipass filter + more drive. Some of the sounds sound a bit plain at points though. Song could benefit from a distant stringed melody in the background with long attack+release. sortof ambientish. Also Id like to hear some more hats n stuff to increase the speed. Some arps inthere would be cool like every four bars put a few echo scifi arp notes. Ride cymbals would be cool in here too, really light though and with long reverb. Kick and snare sound great, but there should be more beat variation+stop n go action/solos sortof. Idk, but its good. gj. __ [SJ] Black Sun Rising: 16-01-2010 18:52 Rev. Truth Producer Registration Date: 16-01-2010 Posts: 7 Youve got some good Ideas here. I do think you need to do some work on your levels but other than that nice trax. Great work on the bass line love the way you choped it up. Maybe you want to try a little change up in drum here and there just give it a little change of pace. The ending to this trax could very easly be a break some where in the middle of this trax. Ther ending has a great change and tone to the overall sound of this song,would have liked to hear more of it. At the end of the day all you can do is make music you want to hear and nmusic your happy with because thats all that matters. 16-01-2010 20:05 drumnbass.be forum » Production » Tunes » Rux - Suplozz - Shade My Shadow