 Vly - Amnesia |
Vly 
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Registration Date: 22-10-2009
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Please check out my new track 'Amnesia' and post your comments here!
Was working on this minimalistic sht last night ..its quite finished i think,tho still needs some work on the transitions,buildups,variations etc..
Anyway hope u enjoy listening ;d
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http://soundcloud.com/vly 
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09-01-2010 14:44 |
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pusha
waveform molester
Registration Date: 07-01-2010
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ok err like the drum layering subtle and moves track along nicely if i was into minimal i would be more into it i think nicely done overall
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09-01-2010 15:56 |
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Suplozz
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Registration Date: 21-11-2009
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Sub is loud, the intro is very good , in fact that beat on the begging could play through the whole song, something like noisia - contact. I was expecting something heavier after the drop, or there are two of them? Dislike that time after the first drop to the another , it lasts for about 15 seconds or so and really slows the whole thing down. The song is really chillin,relaxes me,but as i said,you could down that first beat through the whole song. Melodies are cool, sounds a little bit like reggae,yeah.
Hey,it's cool but you should work on it more .Has potential!
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10-01-2010 18:21 |
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BattleDrone
2161... the future.
Registration Date: 30-12-2005
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Not bad, some ghost bits in your drums could be picked better. And the drum section is pretty busy for minimal. The dropping of an occasional break isn't really according to the style guidelines (but that's up to you).
To avoid having an empty tune, which is a high risk with minimal you need to add low level background sounds (I can hear some pad, so I guess you were aware). Most pro-tunes use some synth or pad sample and play that in reverse with a long attack, very low level, almost non existent, but it fills it up pretty well. Sweeps an swooshes do help too (I also noticed you have them, you analysed the style pretty well).
You did well for such a difficult style, it all sounds pretty easy, but it's quite hard to make IMO.
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10-01-2010 20:49 |
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kanibalboy
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Registration Date: 28-06-2005
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nice beat. its not very powerful though. good work with the percussion though. some nice fx in here too.
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14-01-2010 01:32 |
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Rev. Truth
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Registration Date: 16-01-2010
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Do think you got a winner here. Love the variations you got in place. With a little fine tunnig you got a sure fire hit. Minimal is hard to pull off, you have to make sure every thing is super tight not much to hide little mistakes. Did love the break around 1:00. Its not a bad trax at all. The change in bass line was nice as well. Just keep up the good work mate.All I can say is just keep making music you like and music you want to hear. At the end of the day thats all that matters! Peace.
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