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philbee philbee is a male
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Please check out my new track 'Intrusion' and post your comments here!

happy new year dot.be
Deep Minimal half step track for you
Any feedback appreciated
big up to the dotbe massive

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08-01-2010 23:56 Homepage of philbee
BattleDrone BattleDrone is a male
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Some elements are a bit overpowered causing cracking sounds here and there.
For your style this track has a MASSIVE ammount of variation (loud cheering this end).
Like this a lot if you could clean thos little errors up. I would love it even more if the second drop would be full speed DnB that could be a huge climax.
Although not DnB in a strict way, this is one of your better tunes due to a lot of variation. It sounds like you've put a lot of work into this one.

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09-01-2010 00:30 Homepage of BattleDrone
Kobra10
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The dark beginning adds a great vibe to the track. Kinda spacey feeling at the start. The intro is a little to long in my personal opinion but when the bass comes in it seems pretty banging. The use of the bongos adds a different feel to the track from most that i hear on this site. It is very minimal in its style however, minimalism tends to modulate and change after 16, 32 or 64 bar phrases with extra instruments coming in. I think you should have added more input into the track or changed the riffs of the main synths every so often otherwise it may be percieved as boring. On the whole, very good though.
09-01-2010 14:01
Vly Vly is a male
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Pretty dark atmosphere and all but it gets boring very quick im afraid,maybe add some more variations and a lot more effects or maybe other percussion elements..the way it is sounds just like a 5 min intro..
and yea as BattleDrone said some elemnts are clipping so u should also do a cleaner mix,wich shouldn't be that hard i think..
anyway,its deep deep ,keep it up !

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09-01-2010 14:52
Dethworm Dethworm is a male
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Always love your stuff Philbee! my kinda shit!! drums are a little too minimal and I am really wanting at least a rim shot snare and some other elements just to get my head bobbing a bit. Amazing sound design though as usual.

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09-01-2010 20:27 Homepage of Dethworm
m-ej m-ej is a male
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ez mr philbee sir.
really dark n involving m8,
you got some clipping going on as b/d mentioned.
(do love this minimal feel).

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12-01-2010 11:40
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