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monoxide
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Please check out my new track 'Can't Resist' and post your comments here!
alright ppl liquid 1 here lst 1 i done on fl on reason now aint been on in ages light and dark bassline mixed like anarky says SLATE OR RATE!
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05-01-2010 22:57 |
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organic.
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nice beat, soft sound, nice bass line... all sounds r ok for me, but in structure it seems to me a bit chaotic .. but nice melodies, chill track for me, nice listening, ou yeah
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06-01-2010 00:08 |
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SICKorWELL
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sound like a tune ive heard like alot like it i just cant remember the name but the pads sound all most the same .. if its yours good job.
tune need alot of work got some good ideas in it needs have more flow kinda just has sounds coming in and out with no real flow
not bad though just nees some more love and time put in it
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06-01-2010 03:37 |
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monoxide
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i guarantee this is all my own work and not taken off of any1 elses tracks thanks for the feedback its still a workin progress although not so much since i started usin reason
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06-01-2010 09:18 |
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BattleDrone 
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Strings in intro sound off tone.
Pads are too loud, snare is too loud. In fact everything is sceaming loud, did you use a maximiser.
I can see where you are going, very liquid, nice, good buildup.
That long bass sounds like some dirty jumpup though, doesn't fit with those strings. When the strings are gone it sounds like jumpup. All sounds need tuning somewhat.
I hear 2 tunes that can't be combined.
Use different basses to make a liquid tune or replace the stings to make dirty jumpup.
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06-01-2010 10:33 |
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monoxide
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meh ...can't be arsed i dont use fl any more c what u mean about screamin out f*ck it it is wat it is
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06-01-2010 10:51 |
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monoxide
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also i didnt use a maximiser/limiter because i got so used to takin it off coz i felt it cuts the drums down to much and lets bass eat alot of sound but thats probably because a]i didnt use it correctly and b]fl iscrap and has crap drivers im guna move on to jump up i think
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06-01-2010 15:40 |
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Roel H
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The bassline is to Dominant in this tune and there are now fades between the intro and mid.
Try Random Movement - De-nominatio
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06-01-2010 15:42 |
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Originally posted by SICKorWELL
sound like a tune ive heard like alot like it i just cant remember the name but the pads sound all most the same .. if its yours good job.
tune need alot of work got some good ideas in it needs have more flow kinda just has sounds coming in and out with no real flow
not bad though just nees some more love and time put in it |
Jopp, its from a danny byrds sample pack vol. 2
great samples by the way.
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06-01-2010 15:47 |
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monoxide
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yeh its my track tho i aint ripped it off i used good quality samples
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06-01-2010 16:59 |
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Alwinp
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06-01-2010 18:47 |
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tryptech
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no offence man, your track is nice
good enginering just turn down the volume a little 
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06-01-2010 19:11 |
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Vly
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i really like the feeling and the whole atmosphere of the track..tho the bassline doesnt fit at all,especially when it runs with the strings n padst at the same time
anyway,nice work 
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06-01-2010 19:52 |
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monoxide
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mate iv heard that tune so many times and never found out wot its was nice 1 
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06-01-2010 23:25 |
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TuffDread
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Well, not sure what to make of it as I don't know which parts you've actually made and which bits you've just sequenced. But anyway, if you made that jumpup bass sound, you know which I mean, the sub sound. Anyway, that's really good, I like that a lot, more of this! Drums sound crisp, but are they just one mastered break cut and used as you wanted or all put together from single shots? Totally agree with Battle Drone here when he says "these styles can not be mixed"! Not like this anyway! Needs a lot of work and you need to work out which path you are going to choose for it Liquid or JumpUp? Mix down is good, sounds good to me anyway. Hope you take this constructively bruv,
Tuff.
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07-01-2010 11:24 |
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monoxide
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yeh i made the beat up put of 1 straight loop which is on fruity loops already called 'the funk' and then all different 1 shots and parts the bass i made is the second 1 u hear after the drop usin rob papens predator the two synths u hear r sampled i really liked them and wanted to use them so i stuck em both in i aint goin back to work on this 1 at least not for a while anyway cheers every1 for the comments
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07-01-2010 19:30 |
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pusha
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this track sounds like something i have heard before nice use of pads and synths that violin sounds detuned but still sounds cool that way.intentional? bit of better tension building would have gone a long way in this track both basslines sound good unfortunately not together divide and conquer lol drums all sound really tight and no sound is fighting for space which is good nice track overall melody wise bit jumpy from piece to piece though but nothing a bit of work wouldn sort out keep workin on this 1 man its nearly there i would cut that dirty jumpbass and drive it down the liquid root if i were you just my personal opinion tho.ezee
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07-01-2010 22:02 |
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