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HAMANN 
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Registration Date: 27-10-2007
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Please check out my new track 'Koir (cut)' and post your comments here!
Long time no see. More than a year I didn't produce any full track because of a looping syndrom (making 10-second loops). Today I decided to create something from a scratch and finish it not looking at its quality.
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Mi spik bed Englitchi. Sori.
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31-12-2009 00:08 |
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BattleDrone
2161... the future.
Registration Date: 30-12-2005
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I know what you mean by looping syndrom, it's not a bad thing though... it helps you to develop as a producer. Tune certainly is sick.
The bass pattern could do with a little edit here and there to keep things interesting for the full 7 mins.
Nothing to camplain about other than compression/FX and mastering which could improve a bit. The overall sound is a bit thin and harsh. Use a saturator and/or warmifier on the master buss to fix this. Slight reverb on the hihats could warm up the hi-end a bit.
Keep 'em comming!
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31-12-2009 12:29 |
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Gregg
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Hey man, good tune youve got here, it’s a pity you haven’t yet focused on advanced mixing, equing and compression. Next time you should really do so before uploading, all the sound quality fetishist on this site (me including) will be grateful. 
Really like the style you chose; choir versus hard drums and rough basses is an ideal mixture. The choir samples are nicely processed so far and sit ok in the mix, I just didn’t feel the gating and heavy compression from 03:13 on which overemphasizes the whole thing imo. I’d keep the choir more as the atmospheric and accompanying element which it used to be in the other parts of your tune.
Good work with the bassline, twisted, dirty and heavy, just the way I like it. In the breakdown you added some stereo movement to it which I really fancy. nice.
For the rest I can just agree to what Battlemaster said (quality and structure…). I can only add that your tune would definitively benefit from a tighter, closer and stronger compressed high hat action. And rather replace the heavily panned crashes/rides that go along the hats with some percussions that are more defined.
Good work.
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31-12-2009 13:45 |
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Anarky
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With sum proper eq'in n a proper good mixdown this wud be an absolute banger-love the hevvy feel 2 it! 4 me the eq'in n stuff aint over the top bad or nuffin but cud defintly b better!I wud suggest mayb tightenin (the q) on ur eq plug-ins n if u seem to loose sum levels off the individual sounds then compress/boost n re-mix everyfin down-(thas jus 1 possible way).REALLY like the 5.11 drop better!nice fxs an stuff thruout too!VERY good track 2 me mate!
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01-01-2010 20:50 |
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tryptech
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love the bass man
i think the mixdown is nice, im terrible at mixdowns, and thats just a great part from electronic music, but jeah keep goin eh. Euhm snare and kick lose some dynamics cause they are compresse little to hard, i think, they need some more body.
Bass is twsited as hell, but can be twisted little more in some place to give it a more complexer feeling.
er very good dnb
love your sound,
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01-01-2010 23:26 |
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Phayze
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Registration Date: 01-01-2010
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Cool tune,
Nice and Dark and a good roller.
Keep up the work.
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01-01-2010 23:50 |
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carmod
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this tune is siiiiick! if u can just get the production quality all fixed up its be unreal! bass is the only thing thats not great tbh ( sound quality wise) songs got a cool epic feel to its! good srtucture and atmosphere! maybe the high end is a little too stereo?
Touch up the quality of this and stick it up here i wana hear it!
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03-01-2010 16:04 |
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kanibalboy
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wow, epic! great work, this track rocks.
only thing i would think too make it better is maybe some variation to the beat (kiks n snares) at like the end of every other bar or something. that would set really well with this song.
awesome tune though!
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04-01-2010 01:15 |
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HAMANN
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Thank you guys.
I have listened it to other sources, and I strongly disliked the highs (yep, as you said - they have to be closer/cleaner/less stereo)
I'll try to fix quality problems, thogh it's not easy (especially on highs - my headphones aren't flat at all)
Beat and bass variation isn't pain in ..., so I'll definitely change it.
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04-01-2010 12:16 |
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organic.
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whoa man, if its one day work, hat off. some more filters would be fine, kick is too hard on my speakers, nice structure, nice mix 5.14 .. ok:é, nice music
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