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djstevemack 
Dj Steve Mack
Registration Date: 27-12-2009
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Please check out my new track 'Raw Flow' and post your comments here!
This is my first track I have uploaded on this site. Please let me know what you think. Thanks everyone. Happy new year!
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27-12-2009 06:28 |
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BattleDrone
2161... the future.
Registration Date: 30-12-2005
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Tunes containing copyrighted material are not allowed on here, just to avoid legal problems.
If you intended to make DnB, you might want to pick different bass sounds, speed it up a bit and make the drums roll more. Not bad for starters, but it needs work.
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27-12-2009 19:36 |
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theaudiodemon
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Registration Date: 24-06-2007
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EZ SteveMack, welcome :-)
not bad for your first track, have a lot of potential. Everything sitting nicely in the mix cant really fault much.
Only bad thing I can say is its not DnB.
try making your next track around 175bpm 
Keep em coming!
Audio Demon
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28-12-2009 18:43 |
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Anarky
myspace.com/ anarkyproductions
Registration Date: 02-08-2009
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not bad little ideas-def need 2 be speedin it up to 170-175 unless u ment it 2 be this slow so it aint d&b.track gets boring quickly 2 me even tho u got a fair amount goin on-i fink its the b-line dronin on-no offence-fink u shud do more automation n edits on the bassline an change the beat up mor often n u cud be onto a little breaks track(duno wot speed breaks is n this is tho)
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30-12-2009 02:21 |
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Scurf
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Registration Date: 26-10-2006
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Nice drums in the intro.
Nice bassline.
Good vocal sample around 03:15 min.
Could add some more variation in the second drop, it sound little dull and monotone.
The synth around 4:00 min could me more loud , but that is a matter of taste
Overall good tune:-)
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06-01-2010 14:06 |
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brucifer
Making all the tunes your mum loves
Registration Date: 23-10-2007
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Like the intro bass, thought it was going to turn into a doomy punk song. haha...
Like those synth sounds that change pitch, really remind me of early prodigy.
Like the vocals, bring them forward and distort them.
Really enjoyed it mate 
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01-02-2010 05:33 |
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