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tryptech 
Tryptech
Registration Date: 16-08-2006
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26-12-2009 10:35 |
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eurk0
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Registration Date: 28-05-2008
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i dont really get how comes somebody uses that break these days. it recognizable in a second and that doesnt enhances the originality at all. if i overlook it, the beat is just a break with layered kick and snare. seems quite harsh to me, but should be nicer or lighter with the context i'd guess. just too much repetition, audible cut in it and way too much unrecognisable hats that all merge together. but the high piiiiiip synth was too loud in the intro almost irritating. should be more subtle, more pleasant. the track would be good and nice, but it should have a really better mixdown. i'd also suggest some more bass and work more with stereo. seems like its all almost in the center. and i'd definitely wouldnt use that overused break. cheers
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26-12-2009 16:34 |
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djstevemack
Dj Steve Mack
Registration Date: 27-12-2009
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Good job man! Definitely a really chill track.
I dig the transition around 1 minute, but I feel like you could make it sound much better. Maybe during this transition have the beat build up more gradually, with the piano part coming first.
This is a really great sample, but definitely not a complete track. This has great potential to turn into a great song, but it's not there yet.
It could use a change of pace - another transition around the end of the track into something different than the rest of the track would be great.
Take this constructively though, great work man!
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27-12-2009 05:11 |
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BattleDrone
2161... the future.
Registration Date: 30-12-2005
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Good choice of sounds. Like it.
Midd bass needs a sub layer when it drops. Hi end of the drums is too dominant. Kick and snare need more puch. With some minor improvements this could be a banger!
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27-12-2009 21:45 |
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theaudiodemon
Cool Producer
Registration Date: 24-06-2007
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EZ Scaranja, got plenty of elements going on liking it alot. Mixdowns not too bad bit more work on that high synth in the intro needs turning down a notch.
Good use of samples, keep up the good work
Audio Demon
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28-12-2009 18:48 |
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