 TuffDread - Love Revolution - Jumpup - |
TuffDread 
Mr. Tuff
Registration Date: 26-04-2005
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Please check out my new track 'Love Revolution - Jumpup -' and post your comments here!
greatful for any views, comments or advice, or just a simple, like it or not. Thanks ppz, Tuff.
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25-12-2009 00:27 |
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BattleDrone
2161... the future.
Registration Date: 30-12-2005
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Don't like the vocal very much.. otherwise this is a nu-jumpup tune upto standard.
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25-12-2009 20:03 |
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djstevemack
Dj Steve Mack
Registration Date: 27-12-2009
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Initial thoughts: love the vocal sample in the very beginning. The first transition could use some more body to it. Maybe a small snare roll or some type of fx buildup sound.
The lead/bass sound is too repetitive and it gets pretty annoying as it goes on for the rest of the song. If you're looking to expand this track, I'd definitely recommend throwing a filter on the lead and messing around with the automation.
Some of the beat fills are a little weak and don't flow so well, but could easily be fixed and sound great.
Overall, this is a great base for a track and could easily be modified and expanded to develop a great sounding track.
Please take my criticism constructively man I really dig what you've got - just needs a little more work.
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27-12-2009 05:20 |
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TuffDread
Mr. Tuff
Registration Date: 26-04-2005
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thanks for the advice guys, any critisims taken in a good manner 
its what im askin for anyway lol. I'll upload finished track soon enough, peace, Tuff.
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27-12-2009 21:10 |
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Phayze
Newbie
Registration Date: 01-01-2010
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Hoover!
I am not a super fan of the hoover bass sound in general but this track slams it out there, nice haunting vocal,
Good choon!
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01-01-2010 23:56 |
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pusha
waveform molester
Registration Date: 07-01-2010
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nice track overall prefer it to the frankenstein track posted mix sounds nice and tight think u could have switched the bass in the second drop for a bit of variation like that second bass break down sound sounds a bit distorted mindsy kind of sound cant beleive only listened to 2 minutes tho felt like 5 . would like to hear this track fully finished like the buid up brings everything in quite nicely the bass does get a bit repetative after a while try repatterning or add a bit of filter automation or sumit to give more variation in sound keep at this 1 could be good just needs a bit more time spent on it
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07-01-2010 22:54 |
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