aeLGoa 
psygoatriest
Registration Date: 19-12-2009
Posts: 14
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overall sound starts ok, the drums come in and sound tight, the hihats could be attenuated a bit when they join, harmonic sequence of the low hoover is nicely evocative, the synth lead melodies peak notes are a little loud just before it drops, some of those notes need to sit better in the melody, the final stages of the build maybe could do with some extra percussion, in the subsequent break the sweet bell and crunchy hoover sounds are a bit too far away from each other, it sounds better when they disappear,
around the 2m mark when a middish bass synth joins it needs to have another layer or some other sound - it draws too much attraction to itself, and doesnt sound so special,it then flows on nicely,the energy break around 3m is well placed and moody, the distorted synth that then comes needs to tweaked a bit - it seems to be clashing a bit with the lows/lower mids of the hoovers and the drums, theme recurs nicely, around the 4th minute the hoover sounds a bit off timing, but it gets quickly cut out, the ending needs some extra chops of the percussion and the hoover to harness energy, i wouldnt end it on a 8th bar, mb leave 4 bars and then mutate the riff so it ends in a more melodic way
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