It starts a bit to sudden, panning effect on hats is not a good idea imho. You have to work on your sound quality. Main snare is drowning under rest of the sound, kick is mulled and with no power at all. buildup wise - take any professional dnb tune and put it to your editor as you produce - thats the way to learn build up. Melody and bass sound is not that bad yet but to repetetive and got me boring after 1st try.
Overal not bad as for 1st attempt, Learn, produce and come back with 10th tune
NOT SURE HOW MUCH HELP I WILL BE AS ONLY BEEN PRODUCING FOR 10 MONTHS NOW. I THINK THE TUNE HAS NO REAL BUILD UP AND ANTICIPATION AND NEEDS TO HAVE MORE OF A EPIC START FOR THE STYLE OF TRACK. I LOVE THE BASS BUT I THINK IT NEEDS A LITTLE MORE VARIATION TO KEEP ME INVOLVED. THE PIANO PART HALF WAY THROUGH I THINK NEEDS TO BE MORE INVOLVED FROM THE START THIS I THINK WOULD GIVE THE TRACK MORE OF AN IDENTITY. CAN'T REALLY COMMENT ON DRUMS AS I STRUGGLE MY SELF. THE ACTUAL BEAT PATTERN IT SELF IS COOL I LIKE BUT THE HATS AT THE BEGINING MADE ME A LITTLE SEA SICK. HOPE THIS IS OF SOME HELP
KEEP IT ALIVE
PEACE
KERAZY
, you made me realilise that my track sounds the same all the time.
