TTT31 - Dnb A Little Neuro :-)

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TTT31 - Dnb A Little Neuro :-)

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TTT31
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Registration Date: 24-08-2009
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Please check out my new track 'Dnb A Little Neuro :-)' and post your comments here!

Hi all, i was started after lunch today on this track, i have tried use addictive drums.... so this upload is only start, but you very help me if you write some review on what i should direct and what i do bad , i am a noob with fruity loops all the same dont save me with write-up

28-11-2009 20:42

Glim

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generally speaking a good balance of the drums eq wise, but the snare is got some unwanted distortion..

intro synth thing isn't too cool, not dark enough imo.. try and and some more mids in the eq of the drums, kick is a bit too bass heavy..

love the texture of your sounds but the melodies sound like random hits, theres a 2-note synth in there that is out of tune to everything else.

the main riff is awfully random, sounds like a kid has stumbled across a keyboard.

track would greatly improve with a bit of melody imo..

keep at it tho

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28-11-2009 21:08

BattleDrone BattleDrone is a male

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You're making progress, that's for sure, but there's still work to be done.
That bassline doesn't flow yet. Pitch those drums up a little bit.

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30-11-2009 09:30

Paracyte Paracyte is a male

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hi

little preview of little neuro Wink

To be honest with you sounds a bit chaotic but it may be me only, Intro needs work same sound again and again makes you close your eyes and hope you fall asleep Wink

I like the distorted bass sound.
This vox-like instrument 1:32 for me sounds terrible Wink

keep up your work.

big ups.

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30-11-2009 15:53

Dethworm Dethworm is a male

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Intro needs much more going on....Drums sound overcompressed and not very lively. Synth programming is adloscent and random you should play with the envelope on your synth sounds and some portemento as well. Good idea but not there yet needs a few more hours of work!

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30-11-2009 17:27

TTT31
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i used for bass synth Ni massive plugin and i works in FL studio, i wanna do portamento but in Massive isnt this setup(i didnt find it) so i set up portamento in clasic misc windnow in FL so i have image that it do nothing with my tune... another idea about setup portamento?

30-11-2009 18:39

Gregg

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Originally posted by TTT31
i used for bass synth Ni massive plugin and i works in FL studio, i wanna do portamento but in Massive isnt this setup(i didnt find it)...

Go to voicing, set your synth to monophonic. The trigger can be as you like it but I guess you are after legato. Afterwards simply go to the osc-menu and adjust the glide time (left corner).

30-11-2009 19:18

Gerrit Gerrit is a male

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Intro is a bit long, which shouldn't be an issue, but it is a bit repetitive.
Bass needs a bit more flow, melody isn't bad really, but it's missing some kind of flow.
Kicks are a bit bassy, and drums could be a bit punchier (and maybe a tad louder) overall.

Some good starters in here, so keep working on it!

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30-11-2009 22:31

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