 Azlateen - Tiki Boom Boom |
Azlateen 
Producer
Registration Date: 18-06-2009
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Please check out my new track 'Tiki Boom Boom' and post your comments here!
Well, here's another shot at a tune, after a complete failure of the last one i uploaded lol Needed some feedback on what needs to be done so it's not such a tragedy before it's released....
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08-11-2009 06:54 |
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Vly
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Registration Date: 22-10-2009
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You basicly dont have an intro.The bassline sounds pretty rough and is too repetetive(even for a 3:30 min tune),so u might need to reconstruct it and maybe add some variations.The drums are too compressed,u cant actually hear them,only the crash(witch imo is annoying).U need a much more punchier kick,and u need to bring out the snare,because now its more bass,than drum n bass..The synth is kinda boring,and sounds em..cheap.I cant really call it a melody or a lead just some random hits..The stutering vocal is ok.Overall its not really a good track,it needs complete reworking.Didn't enjoy listening to it,but maybe u can remake it to something better.Keep it up : )
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08-11-2009 13:20 |
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Galvatron
Tourist
Registration Date: 19-10-2009
Posts: 10
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The entire song could be essentially brought down to four bars. That of course makes sense in DnB, but here, I can really hear it. For the whole 3:34 minutes, nothing much really changes. Take some time to add a 40-second intro which sounds completely different from but blends in well with what you already have written.
Fine choice on drums and bass samples. The arrangement of them feels good to the ear, but is not something I would dance to.
The use of the strings isn't very impressive. Try to change what you made into string chords.
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08-11-2009 14:22 |
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Gerrit
Kai
Registration Date: 16-05-2008
Posts: 23
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This tune needs a lot of work, I can imagine it being a decent tune though, after it has been reworked...
First of all, I'm missing the drums, they're overcompressed indeed, even on the more quiet moments it's hard to hear the drums.
The whole song is very repetitive, change the structure, create some variating bars that blend, and arrange a structure there, also create an intro.
The synths sound a bit cheap, but have potential, fatten them up a bit! The vocal is pretty decent, wouldn't change to much about that.
Just get working on it, and you'll get there.
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09-11-2009 10:26 |
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Scurf
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Registration Date: 26-10-2006
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Originally posted by Vly
You basicly dont have an intro.The bassline sounds pretty rough and is too repetetive(even for a 3:30 min tune),so u might need to reconstruct it and maybe add some variations.The drums are too compressed,u cant actually hear them,only the crash(witch imo is annoying).U need a much more punchier kick,and u need to bring out the snare,because now its more bass,than drum n bass..The synth is kinda boring,and sounds em..cheap.I cant really call it a melody or a lead just some random hits..The stutering vocal is ok.Overall its not really a good track,it needs complete reworking.Didn't enjoy listening to it,but maybe u can remake it to something better.Keep it up : ) |
Agreed, but as a preview it has it`s own creativity and style....Altough the bassline is too rough, i like the melody....
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10-11-2009 19:20 |
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SICKorWELL
SICKorWELL DnB
Registration Date: 24-09-2009
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first off mate how long have you been making tunes
send me a email if your for real about learning to produce and il help you out
sickorwell@live.com
nick@pruvenmusic.com
www.myspace.com/sickorwell
hit me up and i can send you some tips and help you out on your sound you got good ideas just need alot of work mate
SICKorWELL
Pruvenmusic.com
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12-11-2009 21:42 |
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c_ctrl
Wicked Producer
Registration Date: 02-06-2008
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Quite a messy structure, it needs an intro and proper breakdown and all that. I like the one shot vocal effects goin on, they sound cool. The drums have so much potential, the beat is wicked but it sound muddy and swamped with compression, needs a bit of mix work on that too but overall it sounds alright mate.
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13-11-2009 01:12 |
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