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carmod
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Please check out my new track 'Convert' and post your comments here!
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06-11-2009 19:05 |
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Vly
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i think the bass is too loud and the drums cant be clearly heard.Also the bass has too much in the high section,a lil eq and it will be ok.If u manage to make a nice intro and a kool composition its gonna be a great track.keep workin on it mate
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07-11-2009 15:59 |
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cynik
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crash at start
cool idea but the drums are lacking. the sound is lost beneath the overpowering bass, the sound is alright. Id like to hear with drums at 2x speed
would like to remix if ure willing. waht software you on?
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07-11-2009 17:29 |
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carmod
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flstudio , ill fnish it off first neway but that wont be till next month when i get a computer thats not shit ( 40g hard drive n 512ram
) and can handle what im tryin to do. ill send it on to ya then tho if ya want
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07-11-2009 18:09 |
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cynik
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07-11-2009 18:39 |
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Galvatron
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Sounds like almost a basis for a track. I find it hard to see how this can become a dubstep track, its more like an intro to a dnb track.
LFO on the hoover at start is way too deep. The beat is a bit experimental, and acceptable. Tough you may want to remove the clicking percussion sound that accompanies the bassdrum.
I need to hear more. Where are the atmosphere sounds? Where are the strings? Last but not least: where is the drop?
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07-11-2009 19:23 |
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Azlateen
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Snare drum is a wee bit too loud, but that's fine really. Although you know what would be cool? If you layered a snare on top of the snare you got with a bunch of ring to it. (Without overpowering the mix of course) I think it would sound badass with it on top. The bass is nice too. I know it's short, but it could use a little more ABAB structure, something that would really stick out from the theme going on the time there. Other than that, I found it to be quite refreshing and well written so far. Too bad it's so short though!
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08-11-2009 07:11 |
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Scurf
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10-11-2009 19:24 |
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SICKorWELL
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highs are missing i hear them kinda they need to be brought out and bass sounds good good start needs some touching up though
good sound mate
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12-11-2009 21:45 |
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c_ctrl
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Some sweet sounding ideas there begging to be put into a structure! The bass is a little too buzzy and swamps the drum part completely, maybe some eq to tame it? Nice atmosphere going on tho
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13-11-2009 01:08 |
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