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demure demure is a male
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Please check out my new track 'Dark Rain' and post your comments here!


a dubby style minimal tune i have been workin on. started it yesterday. its far from perfect but would like to know what you all think Smile

EDIT: its a straight export from reason with no mastering so it might be a little quiet. Bigup

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04-11-2009 08:27
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Really really like the vibe.. Might sound good with some more hihat action, or somekinda tambourine stuff, dunno really, sounds fucking ace. Smile

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04-11-2009 13:39 Homepage of Puzzle
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heeeezeee nauw

really like everything about this except the kick. it sounds cool just the pattern is far to rigid.

need to funk it up a bit so its more in keeping with the rest of the track imo

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04-11-2009 16:37 Homepage of D2o
Ketz Ketz is a male
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ez matey, lovin the pigeon steppin as always Big Grin sweet minimal atmos from the get go, pads that come in are lush, sub is nice, clear and on point. great use of vocals as always Bigup

no critique man, u know what ur doing and i like this lots Rinse

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04-11-2009 18:33 Homepage of Ketz
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Im sucker for the intro sounds thats like drops of water.. ah - hence the name. duh, real smart of me innit

I must say I expected a more solid break, the vibe is alright and the beat is nice but a more concrete kick snare operation would be loads better, that and the kick sounds a tad too loud

otherwise nice pad action, likin the minimal vibes

keep at

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04-11-2009 18:37 Homepage of cynik
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Its a cool track but i definitely wouldn't call it drum and bass. This is more breakz or chill out. The pad work and synths are great the slow decay works. the drums are too slow and repetitive but i guess its a different genre so what would i know. The female vox is cool but i don't know what its saying?
04-11-2009 21:06
demure demure is a male
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@jimmy: yeah will have a look at that mate

@ketz: cheers man Smile

@cynik: i apreciate what your sayin but was trying to go for a lighter more experimental drum beat. as for the kick yes its far too loud. i should have checked before i uploaded really.

cheers for all the feebacks
05-11-2009 01:43
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Really good tune for a rainy & foggy day like this. Good choice of sounds. Everything glues together while nothing disturbs the chilled atmosphere.

I like that your sub bass is more dominant than your kick and leads through the track. Though, your snare could be slightly more upfront I reckon (maybe layered with something hitting a bit deeper).
You could also go a tad more crazy with percussive sounds as there’s still some space in the mix for that.

keep it up.
05-11-2009 16:48 Homepage of Gregg
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i love this, sick dubby stuffs

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22-12-2009 05:27 Homepage of napster55
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ez m8e,
love this, fits perfectly with the uk weather at the mo,
v lush intro, jimmy's picked up on the slightly heavy kick
other than that,
sewpurrrr sexy steppy breaks.

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22-12-2009 10:02
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